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Middle of life where there is the start line And miles to go to the finish line With so many questions and answers. Heaven smiles when god embraces Suddenly with one divine move He sends his smile through images to prove. Do not you worry, Folks. It's fine All your dear ones you lost are safe. ================================= Tenth Placement Contest: The Divine Move

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Date: 7/31/2010 3:24:00 AM
Dear Dr. Ram today i needed inspiration and your poem did it. Thanks for everything.
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Date: 7/12/2010 12:37:00 PM
Dr, Ram - there is a calming message in your words, beautifully written. Many congratulations on your win in Carolyn's fine contest >> James
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Date: 7/12/2010 11:28:00 AM
Congratulations Dr. Ram on your win in Carolyn Devonshire's contest "Heaven Sent Smiles". Love, Carol
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Date: 7/11/2010 11:23:00 PM
A very inspiring write, Dr. Ram, enjoyed how your last 2 lines are also so comforting in :) - congrats! --nikko :)
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Date: 7/11/2010 9:41:00 PM
lovely piece
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Date: 7/11/2010 9:40:00 PM
this is a very sweet write. to know your loved ones are safe is a great thing. hope you have a great night! ~Always&Forever Lynette
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Date: 7/11/2010 5:21:00 PM
Hey, a really good poem you got from that picture, Dr. Ram. Congratulations. LUv, Andrea
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Date: 7/11/2010 3:52:00 PM
Congratulations, Dr Ram on your poem's success in the contest. Agape, Moses
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Date: 7/11/2010 12:05:00 PM
I really like this poem, Dr. Ram, and it would have placed higher if not for a grammar problem in the last line. Congratulations on your placement in the contest! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 7/11/2010 7:53:00 AM
How encouraging .. a write of delight Dr. Ram.. good luck if for the contest.. wonderful words of insight .. from your gifted mind and pen this Sunday.. appreciate your kind word on Mind Power .. now posted Love Found A Way.. to lift spirits today.. with luv..
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Date: 7/11/2010 7:20:00 AM
Emotional, comforting, and a spiritual poem. I liked this message very much! Nicely done! ~ love, Carrie
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Date: 7/11/2010 6:38:00 AM
Great divine move..Keep the inspirational pen flowing..Sara
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