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The Dawn

My heart is full with thoughts of you My mind tries to control And Oh the day is long The dew that settles on my soul.

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Carrie Richards

Date: 12/14/2008 11:35:00 AM

Sweet poem, and well deserved to be featured this week! ~ Carrie

Sharon Winter

Date: 12/9/2008 5:38:00 PM

Congrats on your featured write! Happy holidays! Love, Shar

Vince Suzadail Jr.

Date: 12/8/2008 7:53:00 PM

Congratulations Christina on "The Dawn" being featured. Vince

Elaine George

Date: 12/8/2008 1:00:00 PM

Dear Christinia - congratulations on your feature of the week. Nice metaphor here. Lainie

John Heck

Date: 12/7/2008 5:13:00 PM

Christina - Congratulations on your featured poem this week! Wishing you and yours a Happy Holiday season. Peace always, John

Mickey Pig Knuckles

Date: 12/7/2008 4:30:00 PM

Wow Christina, you have a wonderful talent of speaking volumes to your readers in just a few short lines. Thank You for sharing your passion of literature with us all as I say Congratulations for being featured... MPK

Carrie Richards

Date: 12/7/2008 3:19:00 PM

Lovely little poem, and nicely featured this week! congratulations!! ~ Carrie

Date: 12/7/2008 2:25:00 PM

Nice concise way to convey your thoughts. I really like the last line. Congratulations on having your poem featured. Wishing you continued success with your writing. Karen

Chitra Lakhera

Date: 9/17/2008 6:05:00 AM

There's something deep within this poem. Wonderful writing! love Chitra