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The Darkest Hour-H

He never treated her as a subordinate eve She was only privileged to get pleasure And never got the pain of childbirth from him It was he who ate the forbidden fruit of Eden Shamelessly committed adultery in old age. But now that she has left him for a reason He’s a man of passed-out desires and dreams Looking at beautiful women do infatuate him *PEA - “the molecule of Love” floods his brain Wine, liquor, movies are in the top priorities, Mind filled with lot of aphrodisiacs, vitamin, Viagra, zinc, carrots, oysters, garlic and onion. Exploding coffee machines makes him mad Gets annoyed when neighbor’s dog barks Thumping sound of making love irritates him. At this hour many things provoke his desire Though blessed with desire, no performance.
+++++++ November 15, 2010 Form: Free Verse Hon. Mention +++++++ This is fictional write. *PEA or phenethylamine is an alkaloid and a mono amine **Molecule of Love Compound Found in Chocolate, Phenylethylamine Demonstrates Positive Effects on Mood, Depression, ADHD, Runners’ High, and Love & Monogamy

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Date: 11/3/2015 9:13:00 PM
Dr Ram,, :) Congratulations on having your poem featured in the soups, Home Page. ~SKAT LOVE~
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Date: 2/22/2015 8:09:00 PM
Women love men for the way men treat them, make them feel about themselves, neither performance nor age affect how a man makes a woman feel special, adored, loved. Forgiveness is possible Ram. Congrad's on your win. Light & love
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Date: 2/22/2015 5:47:00 PM
Dr, nice win.................SKAT
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Date: 2/22/2015 5:27:00 PM
Dr Ram, thank you. Nate
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Date: 1/1/2011 5:34:00 PM
Certainly a sad state of affairs! And though proformance is not a woman's issue, the ability to raise desire certainly is...and it's a sad state of affairs when the spirit is willing but the body does not comply. Light & Love
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Date: 12/11/2010 10:31:00 PM
Congratulations on your placement. This was someone's darkest hour--probably a lot of someones, glad its not yours. Liked the science of PEA included.
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Date: 12/11/2010 7:01:00 PM
Very interesting write, looking forward to reading more of your work... Dana'lynn
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Date: 11/30/2010 4:36:00 PM
Congratulations on your win..Sara
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Date: 11/29/2010 5:11:00 AM
Congratulations Dr.Ram on your win in Ryland Matthew's "My Darkest Hour" contest. Love, Carol
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Date: 11/28/2010 8:31:00 AM
Such a different twist on this contest, and done with and interesting observation! ~ Congratulations!
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Date: 11/27/2010 11:44:00 PM
Dr. Ram super congratulations on your placement with this great write ;-) Wilma
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Date: 11/27/2010 10:43:00 PM
Congratulations on your HM, Dr. Mehta. Interesting to read. (^_^) Noel.
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Date: 11/27/2010 7:23:00 PM
An awesome poem Dr. Mehta. Many congratulations for this win.
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Date: 11/27/2010 12:11:00 PM
Dr Ram, Congratulations on your worthy poem's success. Agape, Moses
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Date: 11/27/2010 8:35:00 AM
Congratulations on your placement in Ryland's contest with this moving poem, Dr. Ram. Peace and blessings, Carolyn
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Date: 11/27/2010 7:04:00 AM
Congrats Dr. Ram on your wonderful HM in Ryland's contest with this rare beauty entry my friend .. so wonderful your words ... enjoy your special honor today with luv and a happy weekend.. thankxx for your prayers and support during my Ron's health crisis.. he is feeling much better now ...thankxx dear friend..
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Date: 11/22/2010 12:56:00 PM
don't worry undernath we^all are , i fell being in jamaica
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Date: 11/17/2010 11:38:00 PM
This piece is incredible on all counts. I am in the same contest and now I am frightened at my competition, so thank you haha. Still, beautiful piece of work! and thanks for the congrats on my work. I look forward to more of yours!
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Date: 11/16/2010 6:44:00 PM
By the way, Dr. Ram. About my "worst poem ever" entry, I made it up on the spur of the moment. Please tell me you did not believe I could ever spell that badly? haha. You should make up a really bad one too.It's super easy to do. I look forward to seeing your"worst" poem. haha. LUv, Andrea
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Date: 11/16/2010 6:30:00 PM
gosh, Dr. Ram and here I thought you were spilling your guts about your very own "past" and your "present" hmmm, you are supposed to write a TRUE story, you funny guy. this is good but I wish you luck since you admitted it was not true! (I am afraid to post MY darkest hour, TMI: too much information!) LUv, Andrea
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Date: 11/16/2010 11:02:00 AM
A great teacher always teaches, and a great writer always make others dream ... you are both
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Date: 11/16/2010 10:12:00 AM
Wow Dr. Ram, glad it is fictional.. Really enjoyed it ;) good luck for the contest with this jewel
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Date: 11/16/2010 9:23:00 AM
Hello Dr. Ram Mehta! I really enjoyed this poem...I am still smiling from the read & had to say something about it first. But I also want to thank you for taking the time out to read my poem and leave a comment, it is greatly appreciated!! I will be back to read this again, I am sure of it! Thanks!
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Date: 11/16/2010 7:33:00 AM
Fantastic lines here. The imagery is intensely deep here. Very happy to have started reading your work here...
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Date: 11/16/2010 12:33:00 AM
well whew that this is fictional, Dr. Ram but you sure got me with this-- very intriguing take on Ryland's contest-- wish you the best of luck -- nikko :)
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