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The Dark Obsession- For Contest

The Dark Obsession - for contest Horrendous thunderstorm of explosions Dark clouds of the noxious obsessions...., that we have more weapons; we fight for a cause Malefic causes so senseless and baseless... But paradox is, it appears noble for the offenders Large-scale indoctrination of the young minds for violence and ruthless destruction Obsession of supremacy so dreadfully corrosive Mad spree to hoard guns and WMDs, Innocents or criminals, men or animals, shudder with fear all that has life! Collossal apocalypse of terror-waves ... Atrocious erosion of moral and social fabric Grotesque grimace at the principle of universal brotherhood that underlies all our holy scriptures! Oppressed n' suppressed are the weak n' unequipped Belligerent, pugnacious mindset mobilisation to bring vitriolic ripping n' decaying of global peace Peaceful waters turned filthy black with terror, boils in the furnace to give to the globe a shower of hot flowing blood! Amicable contemplation to assassin this obsession would bring no wars, no terrorism but peace! Sustainable peace assured for the eternity! © Anulaxmi Nayak, 2015 glossary: WMD- Weapons of Mass Destruction For contest: The tragedy of black sponsored by: Bev Smith Submitted by: Anulaxmi Nayak Written on: 18th August 2015

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Richard Lamoureux

Date: 8/19/2015 8:29:00 AM

You expressed this well, I con think of few things darker than these.

Anu Nayak
Date: 8/19/2015 8:47:00 AM

Dear Richard, thank you for visiting my poem and i agree with you in totality that this is just a dark poem and darkest things are much more there...one fish is always bigger than the other fish! let your pen flow on the dark issues...as they require much light to be thrown as they are issues of great concern!......love anf hugs, Anu:-)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/18/2015 4:13:00 PM

oh my, you show the very very black side of the world with this intense writing. Good luck in this interesting contest!! I bet you do well.

Anu Nayak
Date: 8/18/2015 10:27:00 PM

Dear Andrea, thank you .....happy you liked my dark poem for contest:-)thanks again....love,Anu:-)

Paul Callus

Date: 8/18/2015 12:37:00 PM

A dark obsession, indeed, Anulaxmi!! The world has become a stage for tragic drama, where the actors are victims of their own doing. It does not have to be like this...we must not lose hope of making a better world! #7 // paul

Anu Nayak
Date: 8/18/2015 12:41:00 PM

Dear Paul, thank you for your visit to my poem and your feedback and a 7! thank you...well you are right...hope and the faith that our hope will surely find light is the need of the hour...let there be a sweep of peace waves all over is what I wish and pray for!.....love, Anu:-)