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The Constant Reminder of Why I Love My Life-Favorite Love Poem Contest

Favorite Love Poem Contest Sponsor: Nayda Ivette Negron You are the constant reminder of why I love my life, you are the gentle immortality I have longed for, I can't breathe without you whispering in my ear so softly... -you “can't live without me”. We have that in common and we have our star, with our names engraved like a knife on wood, if you look closely it's written so sweet and assured. I'm craving your safety and your sweet desire for my yearning body... Come here and be with me like we always do, light me with your matches to explore... -our fire with in each other. Starve for my tenderness under the moon, for it is ours tonight, sweetheart, let's remind each other with our sensual combination, our continuous secret of our sacred oneness and... -surrendered souls. The honest way you explore my faithfulness, set off the most intensive alarm I have ever thirsted for. For you, my love, are my strongest weakness, and I, your sweetness, am grateful to be your wife. I am your constant reminder of why... -you love your life. Written By: Laura Loo Date: October 5, 2015 1st Place Winner

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Date: 12/17/2015 12:51:00 PM
WONDERFUL WIN. SKAT
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Lu Loo
Date: 12/17/2015 1:04:00 PM
Thank you :)
Date: 12/15/2015 10:33:00 PM
Loving write! Congratulations!!
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Lu Loo
Date: 12/17/2015 12:34:00 PM
Many thanks Michael...*smiles*
Date: 12/15/2015 4:03:00 PM
Lovely, Laura Loo. Congratulations on your win and placement. Hugs, Sandra
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Lu Loo
Date: 12/15/2015 5:48:00 PM
Thank you Sandra *smiles*
Date: 12/15/2015 12:11:00 PM
Congrats Laura, what a beautiful write, "you are my strongest weakness" just great, well deserved win.
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Lu Loo
Date: 12/15/2015 5:47:00 PM
Thank you John very much :) *smiles*
Date: 12/15/2015 10:35:00 AM
Congratulations Laura.
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Lu Loo
Date: 12/15/2015 3:11:00 PM
Thank you soooo much Nayda...I am honored...*smiles*
Date: 12/11/2015 11:25:00 AM
ooh I do like the imagery LuLoo and I especially love the line 'For you, my love, are my strongest weakness', a beautiful write good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx7
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Lu Loo
Date: 12/11/2015 11:41:00 AM
Thank you sweet Jan...*smiles* -luloo

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