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The birds and the bees is a common expression Here and there, birds build the nests East and West they fly, and don't rest. Birds are men and bees are women In fact, birds are free to fly where they like Restricted are the bees to single queen Do spend entire life keeping her alive. Such is an old story of birds and bees. A bee pollinates flowers, birds spread seeds Naturally men impregnates eggs, women give birth Damned otherwise, sex is the key for survival. The bees make honey, the birds eat the bees Help flowers to grow when bees become compost Enables the bees collect nectar produced by flowers. Bees again make honey, the circle goes on Entwined together to the cycle of life and death Evidence of extinction they are considered when Startting to disappear fast on the earth =================================== Ninth place winner in Contest: The Birds and Bees In honor of Carol Brown

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Date: 9/10/2010 9:11:00 AM
I have sparkles in my eyes and a smile on my face. I am offering you hardy congratulations for your win in my contest Dr. Ram. Amazing poem. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/10/2010 7:49:00 AM
I thought this was one of the best because of the statement it makes about men and women, Dr. Ram. Congratulations on your success in Carol's contest. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 9/10/2010 4:31:00 AM
The oh SO stark realities of life. You tell 'um ram. ;) Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
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Date: 9/9/2010 11:25:00 PM
Many congratulations on this wonderful win Dr. mehta.
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Date: 9/9/2010 10:35:00 PM
hmmm, the birds sound like they have the more exciting life in this poem, hahaha. I liked the way you used anology. Congratulations on your win with this original poem. LUv, Andrea
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Date: 9/9/2010 10:07:00 PM
Congratulations on your winning entry Dr. Ram. Mahalo, Connie
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Date: 9/9/2010 10:07:00 PM
Congratulations. This is a great and interesting poem. Love, Joyce
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Date: 9/9/2010 6:46:00 PM
nice on , congrats on your win in the contest
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Date: 9/9/2010 6:07:00 PM
Congratulations Dr Ram on your top ten award for a great poem. Agape, Moses
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Date: 9/9/2010 5:32:00 PM
Wonderful winning poem, with a lesson in each line! Congratulations on your win, Dr. Ram ! ~ Carrie
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Date: 9/9/2010 4:46:00 PM
Super congrats Dr. Ram on your stupendous win and victory tonight in Carol's great contest.. with this excellent entry ..enjoy my friend with luv..
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Date: 8/17/2010 6:19:00 PM
Interesting ideas presented in this acrostic! I enjoyed where you went with this. I've pictured birds in a variety of ways and bees too, this is a little different :) Thank you for your kind remarks, I appreciate them greatly! hugs, Kris
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Date: 8/17/2010 4:59:00 PM
Doctor, I like this as it has a rough approximation of Carol's style. That's a nice tribute in itself. Thank you for all your kind words. They mean a lot, they really do. Regards, Gerard.
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Date: 8/16/2010 7:50:00 PM
Great comparative analogy Dr. Ram.. interesting to watch both birds and bees and see the structure they follow to survive.. great entry for the contest.. good luck my friend.. soup mail in a few..luv..
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Date: 8/16/2010 7:19:00 PM
Yes, the bees are in trouble and it follows that we are too. Great poem. Thank you for your congrats. Love, Joyce
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Date: 8/16/2010 3:52:00 PM
A great poem for a great contest, Doc.
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Date: 8/15/2010 6:28:00 PM
great thoughts...enjoyed reading today!~
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Date: 8/15/2010 10:52:00 AM
very nice good luck in the contest good to see you still writing wonderful poetry need a while to catch up but i will have a great weekend faleshia
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Date: 8/15/2010 6:25:00 AM
For sure this should be in winners circle my friend outstanding imagery even brought smile to face and yes us women are those honey of a bee lol great work and read thanks for uplift and for your kind comments me still on working to get in your latest contest just having alittle hard time with form cause its new keep up the great work my friend hugs
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Date: 8/15/2010 6:03:00 AM
great poem! Doc! I am goin campin' w/my girls for a wk on Lk. Superior....seeya on the other side, thanks for your congrats & comments, jimbo
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Date: 8/15/2010 5:30:00 AM
A winner my friend, this is a gret entry for the contest...thanks for always stopping by to read my work.. Michael
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Date: 8/15/2010 4:07:00 AM
Good luck in the contest with this one...It has many facts in it..Keep the creative pen flowing..Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work..Sara
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Date: 8/15/2010 2:01:00 AM
Brilliant piece of writing and exposure of a lovely theory of evolution. Great write that with a unique flow. And many thanks for your kind and precious comments on my poem ‘Let My Country Wake up and Bloom'. Love and best wishes.......Ravindra
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Date: 8/14/2010 11:40:00 PM
I especially like the third verse dr. Ram. So true.
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Date: 8/14/2010 11:04:00 PM
very interesting ideas, Dr. Ram, you make the male counterpart seem as if it got the bad end of the stick. haha. Not so sure about that all the time! Hey, if I am not mistaken, this is an acrostic poem contest, I think. Check it out, Dr.RAm. I would like to see you rate high, but this is not acrostic, I really enjoyed it as a great poem about the birds and the bees. Luv, Andrea
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