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The Chorus of Dawn- Haiku Medley

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Below is the poem entitled The Chorus of Dawn- Haiku Medley which was written by poet Eileen Manassian. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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The Chorus of Dawn- Haiku Medley

           World hushed in silence
          Birds unable to keep still…
             The chorus of dawn

                Melody of praise
     Chases the shroud of the night…
             Blessed hues of morn

           Dawn gives way to day
            The celebration of life…
               Is well under way	

           Eileen Manassian Ghali

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  1. Date: 3/14/2013 4:32:00 PM
    This is very beautiful... The first and second were stunning...-R

  1. Date: 3/1/2013 12:12:00 PM
    Eileen a beautiful painted melody with your Haiku. Warm Smiles, Connie

  1. Date: 3/1/2013 8:56:00 AM
    very nice imagery!Love this.Read my poem YOUR SINGLE GLANCE when u get time.

    Manassian Avatar Eileen Manassian
    Date: 3/1/2013 9:56:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks! Will check it out right now! :)
  1. Date: 3/1/2013 6:16:00 AM
    This is the form that I struggle with but you seem to have the hang of it.

    Manassian Avatar Eileen Manassian
    Date: 3/1/2013 8:05:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Richard, I don't know if I have it down pat. I had some discussions with two Poetry Soupers about this form. Seems that there is more to it than this...I try to get the breakoff after the second line where the BAM is supposed to come it. I hope I've managed. I do stick to th 5-7-5 syllable rule so...yea...glad you liked it!
  1. Date: 3/1/2013 6:13:00 AM
    I never understood Haikus... They are so Japanese!!! Ha-ha.. But you have made this venture into my heart and my brain!!! You are so talented, my dear!! Queen Eileen.... this is a masterpiece!

    Manassian Avatar Eileen Manassian
    Date: 3/1/2013 8:07:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Guru dear...thank you so much for your sweet post. I do love hearing from you and SEEING you! HA HA! Thanks for the visit in my office the other day! Well, I really wasn't much into haikus...and not because they are Japanese...HAHA! No...but I like them because you can say so much in so little and feel satisfied! Hugs!
  1. Date: 3/1/2013 6:08:00 AM
    Oh i am so glad, to be the first here to witness this wonderful poetry, the early bird gets the worms, so they say..love this beauty

    Manassian Avatar Eileen Manassian
    Date: 3/1/2013 8:09:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Glad your tum tum is full of yummy cheese, though I don't try to write cheesy stuff! HA HA! ;)
    Manassian Avatar Eileen Manassian
    Date: 3/1/2013 8:08:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Harry...my pleasure to have you as the first to read this! :) How have you been, my dear! I always love hearing from you! Glad you liked it! Take care!
    Jad Avatar Guru Jad
    Date: 3/1/2013 6:14:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    ....... but the second mouse eats the cheese :D... so the proverb continues hahaha...