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The Canal

The working navvy did dig deep He followed Brindly’s new laid plan A transport system to complete A salvation for the labouring man As the furrow cut with sweat and maul With breaking backs and torn sinew Each man in turn to heave and haul Sustenance for starving kin renew Tracts of land transform through spade and pick Veins enriching the countryside Bringing new life, each shovel, each brick Levelling earth, raising national pride A true revelation this arterial plan Almost lost through modernisation Abandoned, grown dense, dispirit man As steam and diesel grew within the nation Each lock assiduously built Before first steam engine’s whistle blew Weeds strangle, progressive man’s new guilt The canals ebb, debris as seeds strew More beauteous now than ever been Our arterial chart of the waterway Each torn muscle, victuals did glean Bed and nourishment for one more day The navvy’s ghosts look down, heads held high Their gnarled hands rest in heavenly peace Majestic waterways dug in sweat with sigh A once industrial, now beautiful masterpiece. © 16/11/2013 GG Inspired by Harry J Horsmans' free verse 'The Cut' which is a colloquial name for a canal

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Date: 3/23/2014 12:07:00 PM
A journey through history. Canals are so neglected in poetry and yet so fashionable again. Thankis for penning ... Enjoyed
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Date: 11/21/2013 5:00:00 PM
So glad you are back in our soup mix I hope you are well! Light & Love
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Date: 11/19/2013 7:32:00 PM
WOW, wonderful great job on this write enjoyed, enjoyed it alot . and thanks for the congrad cheri
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Date: 11/19/2013 6:24:00 PM
Mandy ..an absolutely wonderful write...I feel like I just watched a lovely documentary... in poetry form...my favorite kind of shows..beautiful poem..
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Date: 11/19/2013 5:51:00 PM
Wow...a great poem inspired another great and powerful piece...I stand in awe of this masterpiece you have crafted!
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Date: 11/19/2013 3:54:00 PM
wow, you were well inspired by harry. He is someone who pays such deep tribute to the common man and you have followed in his footsteps with this poem too. Nicely done!!
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Date: 11/19/2013 10:27:00 AM
wow Mandy, this is so creative, living in skipton which it's self is a canal town,, i can truly relate to this wonder, your last verse sums it up in a nutshell, i really love this ... poetry at its best,, in fact this is living poetry,, and it does not get much better than this....,
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Date: 11/18/2013 5:56:00 PM
Great tribute to the men who built the canals Mandy, the navvies. I'm living next to the cut myself at present. Take care, Richard
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Date: 11/18/2013 12:10:00 PM
- Talk about physical work, and it was real work! - Much toil, sweat and blood. - Nice to read Mandy. - A really good work. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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