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The Bells

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The Bells

~~ In an old Victorian building lives two cats and a lady The girl cat is Patches and the boy cat is called Peanut And the lady is called Dear Heart, they all live in harmony One day, Dear Heart decided the cats needed to have collars So she bought a pink one for Patches and a blue one for Peanut Each collar had a little bell that tinkled and tinkled as the cats walked Now, Patches loved her collar but Peanut twisted about He flopped on his back, putting his paws inside the blue collar Finally, the bell fell off and he pounced after it across the room As Patches walked around her little bell went tinkle, tinkle, tinkle Peanut was determined to get that bell and became quiet the pest Dear Heart talked to Peanut telling him to stop and leave the bell alone When Dear Heart came home from work the cats came She reached to stroke Patches and noticed the pink collar The bell was missing, she looked at Peanut, bad cat she said Where the bells went is still a mystery that may stay unsolved Patches still has her pink collar, she likes to show it off for visitors Peanut totalled destroyed his within days and was very proud of that Written by Constance La France October 27, 2012 Narrative In Memory of Peanut the Cat

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  1. Date: 11/21/2012 9:13:00 PM
    Constance,, Stopping by to greet you and every other soup poet, with a special thank you comment, during this wonderful Thanksgiving season. Hope you do not mind the time I am taking to express my sincere appreciation for any support you have offered during the years, or time you have been here on the soup. I am deeply thankful and extend to you my best wishes for a happy and healthy Poetic Magical Thanksgiving Day. *Always & Forever, the Poet Destroyer; -*

  1. Date: 10/28/2012 10:49:00 AM
    Thanks for your wonderful comments on my poem, greatly appreciated. Love Constance

  1. Date: 10/27/2012 9:30:00 PM
    Constance, always loving your work...pd

  1. Date: 10/27/2012 6:05:00 PM
    Cats are fun and mischieveous creatures. A joyful story to read.

  1. Date: 10/27/2012 5:56:00 PM
    This is quite the wondrous narrative my friend! I really enjoyed reading this very beautiful and enlightening poem this evening! What a wonderful and incredible piece, Great Work!!

  1. Date: 10/27/2012 5:07:00 PM
    * Ahhh, Sooo Sweet Yet Sad, Sweet Beautiful Constance, That Peanut Passed Unto Kitty Heaven. Made Me Remember The Story Of An Angel Whom Had The Most Enchanting And Beautiful Of Voices Far Beyound The Stars. Makes One's Heart A Tad Bit Sad. I Enjoyed Your Wonderful Well Written Verse And I Do Love The Colour 'Pink' As Pretty Little Meows Like 'Patches.' Love Always, Rachel *