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The Beauty Of Women- Continued

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The Beauty Of Women- Continued

Well it was another one of those days Where the devil had come about I was trying to write about the beauty of women And the words just came right out What I was trying to say was their all beautiful to me And most men that I know would be sure to agree But the words that I wrote that flew out so free May have started a hate for me that I shall soon see Now I'll spend my days all alone,and affraid to leave this house For a woman might sneak up and try to strangle me with her blouse I should have never wrote those words because I'm a spouse And now my wife probably thinks I'm nothin more than a louse But what I was trying to say was somethin most men will all agree You don't need to always compare yourselves for it's something we all see Your shoes,your clothes,your hair,your nails, it all just drives us so crazy You all have your own beautiful look so please accept it and just let it be I never meant to degrade you in anyway or to cause you any alarm But the hits those words received seems like I may be heading for some harm So I ask for your forgiveness and please don't send out your women of arms Because I told the men in my neighborhood,and their quite handy with their charms
DannyBoy 1-17-13

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  1. Date: 2/14/2013 9:20:00 PM
    Dan , Stopping by with sincere thanks for your kind comments. It is appreciated more than words or can say... Wishing you the best Valentine's Day YET! Always & Forever :-) LINDA .

  1. Date: 1/23/2013 4:45:00 PM
    I can just picture hoards of women chasing you with their blouses....funny and entertaining write Dan! Hugs

  1. Date: 1/21/2013 1:30:00 AM
    Hi DAn apologise why only a fool could misinterpret what you wrote, like tjis to, all the best Big O

  1. Date: 1/19/2013 4:35:00 AM
    Dan, I told you..."fraught with danger" ... a whole string of women after you now... what a sensual way to die... Terry (good poem, though... perhaps suitable for an epitaph...)

  1. Date: 1/18/2013 9:41:00 PM
    Your quiet charming Dan, love it too, xxx

  1. Date: 1/18/2013 8:21:00 PM
    Dan; don't worry. Whatever will be will be. God bless. Lucilla

  1. Date: 1/18/2013 6:18:00 AM
    lol....funny funny man Dan man hehehe! - Shaz

  1. Date: 1/17/2013 12:26:00 PM
    lol ....... I see a picture ... A whole army of angry women outside your door ..... Now it will be hard to be "Dannyboy" ....... lol. - oxox / / f.e.f. Anne-Lise :) -> .... RUN!

    Kearley Avatar Dan Kearley
    Date: 1/17/2013 12:34:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Hahahahaha... :o0 I'm peeking out my windows! I know they are out there!...Hahaha At least I still got oxox from you. :o) f.e.f