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O lord, lack virtues Teach us mercy, love,Holiness To teach on return. ====================== Tenth place winner Contest: "Sunday Senryu" "Angelic Anthem" of Landa-marie, the sweetheart

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Date: 5/8/2014 8:39:00 AM
Dr. Ram So few words but loaded with wisdom, deepness, truth and power. Thank you for the nice comment on my Cowboys poem.
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Date: 8/18/2010 4:47:00 AM
you are a brilliant poet!! love it!
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Date: 8/13/2010 1:23:00 PM
I am quite sure that this is definitely one of things that the angels sing about concerning us as humans. Congratulations! This is spot on!
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Date: 8/12/2010 2:23:00 PM
Congratulations on your win! What a terriffic Sunday senyru! Love, Susan
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Date: 8/12/2010 9:45:00 AM
Congratulations Dr. Ram on your win in Linda-Marie's contest" Sunday Senryu-An Angelic Anthem". Love, Carol
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Date: 8/8/2010 9:17:00 PM
Congratulations on your win with this heavenly senryu <*.*>
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Date: 8/8/2010 6:59:00 PM
congrats on your win with this lovely senryu
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Date: 8/8/2010 6:21:00 PM
Congrats Dr. Ram on your success in my Sunday Senryu contest with this beautiful entry.. appreciate your constant support ..with luv..
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Date: 8/8/2010 1:40:00 PM
Lovely Senryu. Thank you for my 8th place in your Pantoum contest. It was a fun try at a new form. Love, Joyce
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Date: 8/7/2010 10:30:00 PM
This is a wonderful Haiku. I enjoyed it. Thank you for all your nice comments on my poetry. Best wishes in the contest... Love Scarlett
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Date: 8/7/2010 10:18:00 PM
It would be amazing if we adhere to your advice Dr Ram.. All the best for the contest ~ Wilma
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Date: 8/7/2010 10:01:00 PM
no doubt,even in these times,as we struggle to relate and understand the conflicts we all share,directly or indirectly... very nice senryu with a thought provoking theme....peace , jay
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Date: 8/7/2010 9:00:00 PM
A beautiful prayer, Dr. Ram. Best wishes in the contest. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 8/7/2010 8:03:00 PM
enjoyed reading today, truly uplifting work!
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Date: 8/7/2010 7:07:00 PM
Lovely thought Dr. Ram. It would do us all good to do a little learning and teaching. Charles
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