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If there is one picture that captures the soul of the land through which, I've had the privilege of paddling it is Tom Thompson's The West Wind

 

These lakes are scratches gouged by glaciers from rocks new when life began. Life is hard here soil thin, fire common yet Thompson's West Wind is but a paddle ahead. Blood flows thickly o’er flesh to knit a healing scab leaving just a faint scar. Stir not these calm waters nor linger o’er faint lines. Paddle lightly to the sunset sending ripples to the dawn. May 19, 2014 - The Perfect Painting __________________________________________________________________

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Date: 4/8/2016 9:40:00 AM
Good imagery
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D.W. Rodgers
Date: 4/8/2016 12:49:00 PM
Thanks
Date: 6/19/2014 9:41:00 PM
I quite enjoyed this poem!!!!
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D.W. Rodgers
Date: 6/20/2014 7:24:00 AM
Thanks for your comment, glad you enjoyed
Date: 6/12/2014 9:05:00 AM
Really, really like verse 3! Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
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Date: 6/15/2014 9:33:00 PM
Thanks Debbie, good to know you appreciated my transiiton from landscape to personal.
Date: 6/10/2014 8:48:00 PM
thank you for the reply... Linda
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Date: 6/10/2014 3:49:00 PM
Thank you for introducing us to "Thompson's West Wind," Aberfoyle, and congratulations on your win! Best wishes, Carolyn
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Date: 6/10/2014 8:42:00 PM
Thanks Carolyn, Thompson is an icon in Canada and echos of his vision make up our landscape.
Date: 6/10/2014 3:27:00 PM
A Dave,, Congratulations....... Love your perfect painting, poem. Every poem on Elly's list has amazing imagery. Love <3 LINDA
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D.W. Rodgers
Date: 6/10/2014 8:37:00 PM
Thanks Linda, itis most interesting to see how many takes there were on this theme
Date: 6/10/2014 2:39:00 PM
Aberfoyle, :) Congratulations, awesome picture painting, poem. ~SKAT~
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D.W. Rodgers
Date: 6/10/2014 8:35:00 PM
Thanks Skat
Date: 6/10/2014 1:10:00 PM
this exemplifies it.. painting in a poetry.. :) wow!!! Congratulations!!! GBU=====Olive Eloisa
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D.W. Rodgers
Date: 6/10/2014 8:25:00 PM
Thanks Olive
Date: 6/10/2014 12:57:00 PM
Beautiful write - congratulations on a well-deserved win!
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D.W. Rodgers
Date: 6/10/2014 8:13:00 PM
Thanks Pandita
Date: 6/10/2014 12:01:00 PM
congratulation on a verse well written ......Seren
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D.W. Rodgers
Date: 6/10/2014 7:55:00 PM
Thanks Seren
Date: 5/19/2014 10:40:00 AM
Painting good.
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D.W. Rodgers
Date: 5/19/2014 11:00:00 AM
Thanks Muhamma

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