The Moon - the Pantoum Style

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~THE MOON ~ (Pantoum) THE MOON IS NOT TOO BRIGHT TONIGHT WHAT'S WRONG WITH THE MOON I WISH IT WAS REALLY BRIGHT I JUST LOVE WATCHING THE MOON WHAT'S WRONG WITH THE MOON I MISS WATCHING IT SHINE HIGH I JUST LOVE WATCHING THE MOON PEEPING HER YELLOW FACE THROUGH I MISS WATCHING IT SHINE HIGH WITH ALL THE CLOUDS PLAYING HIDE 'N SEEK PEEPING HER YELLOW FACE THROUGH SHE CAN PLAY WITH US ALL KIND OF TRICKS WITH THE CLOUDS PLAYING HIDE 'N SEEK I WISH IT WAS REALLY BRIGHT SHE CAN PLAY WITH US ALL KIND OF TRICKS THE MOON IS NOT TOO BRIGHT TONIGHT. Dorian Petersen Potter aka ladydp2000 copyright@2015 June.17.2016

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Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 6/18/2016 4:50:00 AM

- A wonderful poem, Dorian - (7) - I wish you a lovely weekend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 6/18/2016 9:18:00 PM

Thank you ever so kindly, Anne-Lise, for stopping by and commenting so beautifully on my poem.Very deeply appreciate it dear friend.Sending you my love n' prayers always.Take very good care of yourself now Anne!Wishing you a very lovely week!In his light God bless you always!:))Hugs!D