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That heavy feeling

the heavy feeling of 
that screech !

And her slam ‘pon me,
as in;
her best friend too,
came suddenly

Their press was
to say the least;
as myself now
will attest

The conductor of that train
slammed on
brakes !

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  1. Date: 11/20/2011 1:59:00 AM
    This one was interesting and awesome!! Always, Laura

  1. Date: 11/14/2011 7:50:00 PM
    I would say you were lucky to have such a press and they were happy to have such an amazing landing place! Sounds like fun James.

  1. Date: 11/11/2011 10:33:00 PM
    you present a tingling image here, wonderful!

  1. Date: 11/10/2011 5:14:00 PM
    they must have been very convincing. john

  1. Date: 11/10/2011 5:39:00 AM
    I have enjoyed reading your poetry and wish you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be James. May inspiration come into your soul each and every day. I will stop in at the Soup and see how you are doing from time to time. Love and best wishes always, Carol

  1. Date: 11/9/2011 5:45:00 PM
    gosh, I hope it was just a slam and that was all! INteresting poem topic, James! Loved that last part of how the conductor slammed on those brakes.

  1. Date: 11/9/2011 2:40:00 PM
    I understand this poem quite well. I can easily relate. Hugs, catie

  1. Date: 11/9/2011 1:47:00 PM
    A very nice way to hit the floor. Hope nobody was hurt. Love, daver

  1. Date: 11/9/2011 12:35:00 PM
    Thanks for your comments, James. Now don't forget to send seafaress8 your home address. At the post office the other day there was a long line. A darling little boy named Noah and a man who looked like Santa kept everyone entertained. I thought of your Noah, of course, and what a joy it must be to spend the holidays with him. Love, Carolyn

  1. Date: 11/9/2011 12:01:00 PM
    Very thought-provoking poem, James. Hearing disparaging words from a friend certainly can feel like a train wreck. I hope you'll email me your address so I can send you a Christmas card. Love you, Carolyn

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    Date: 11/9/2011 12:09:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Hey Carolyn, *smiles*'ve seemingly came up with another analogy of mine write ! I'll have to read it over and look for your thoughts on this write. It's just a lil' wittiness about two girlies who fell on me when the train conductor hit the brakes unexpectedly! ya girlie for reading ! Much love, james
  1. Date: 11/9/2011 11:47:00 AM
    Cute write James. Thank you so much for your wishes on our new little grandson. love phyl