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That Girl in the Dress

Finally I've made it to paradise, surrounded by the sea
Tranquil blues in shadow, are what it's peripherals be

White buildings reflect the sun, an image I'll never forget
To watch our sun disappear, the most beautiful of sunsets

Whilst the night comes down, such beauty continues to be
My eyes now in capture, to the sight that confronts me

She stands in proud like stance, a lady unknown to thee
Tanned, so beautiful I witness, impressed my eyes do see

Torso shaped with black, white lace adorns it's low
It's the she that wears it's colours, that makes it's beauty flow

Hair of dark curls hang, like the "Gardens of Babylon"
Flavours of life emanate, my heart appears in throng

As I sit here in La Ola, on paradise by the sea
It's where I witnessed that girl in the dress, captured, I am thee

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  1. Date: 1/17/2012 12:20:00 PM
    Stopping by to thank you for your kind comments on my poetry James. It is always a pleasure to read your poetry. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 1/4/2012 7:28:00 PM
    I wonder if you live near the sea James. I guess most places in Scotland are not far from it. I love your poem on this enigmatic lady with curls like the "Gardens of Babylon" So descriptive for my imagination.

  1. Date: 1/3/2012 5:51:00 AM
    Yet another fav for me dear poet ! And you know me James, I read my favz from time to time, as a mater of fact, I'm going to go through them some time soon, and I knows you will be among mine favz for sure ! Have a fantastic week sir ! Much love, james

  1. Date: 1/2/2012 3:15:00 PM
    Hey i liked this girl and dress write,,as i see did the lovley Sara..) anyway in case you didn't notice I AM BACK...) ha ha" and good to read you James..& take care...!

  1. Date: 1/2/2012 10:38:00 AM
    James, very impressive..My father always told me that he liked the girl in the dress and that the dress was alright but the girl made the dress look pretty..Thanks for stopping by, reading and taking time to comment on my work..Soup mail..Sara

  1. Date: 12/31/2011 10:58:00 PM
    A lovely poem James.Wish you a very very Happy New Year.

  1. Date: 12/31/2011 4:54:00 PM
    a very pretty poem for the new year, James. Thanks for your interest in my blog yesterday. A big happy new year to you.

  1. Date: 12/30/2011 5:17:00 PM
    I enjoyed your poem very much, James. Wishing you and your a very Happy New Year! Hugs, Catie :)

  1. Date: 12/30/2011 4:59:00 PM
    Very descriptive set of couplets, James. Good work.

  1. Date: 12/30/2011 4:59:00 PM
    She is in my vision, as the heroine in a novel....lovely write, James! And to you and wish to you for a Happy New Year! May you have the best year with many wonderful things in 2012!!