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Thank You

Thank You once Thank You twice And thank You once again Thank You for the past I've had It has kept me close to You Without Your loving guidence I'd never have made it through Thank You for this present time Much wiser than before I'll try to use it faithfully To profffit You more and more Thank You for the future And what ever it may bring I'll keep planting the seeds You've given me Like it is forever spring

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 3/2/2011 9:27:00 AM
So glad to hear from you! Some more easy INFO! When in doubt do just as you did, you had some rhyming words call it rhyme! Under the heading of rhyme there is a form called QUATRAIN A stanza or poem consisting of four lines. In the basic form, Lines 2 and 4 must rhyme while having a similar number of syllables. In verse 2,3 & 4 you are writing in quatrain form! Just thought you'd like to add to your growing knowledge! Light & Love
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Date: 9/23/2014 9:01:00 PM
A very late thank you.
Date: 3/2/2011 8:07:00 AM
An enjoyable read. Well done. Beat wishes Em :)
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Date: 9/23/2014 9:02:00 PM
thank you I am glad that you enjoyed it
Date: 3/2/2011 6:56:00 AM
I like this, such a simple idea and so very effective in that the poem could in fact be thanking any thing and any one..enjoyed..cheers.
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Jasonpoet Boyd
Date: 9/23/2014 9:03:00 PM
Thank you I am happy that you have enjoyed it.

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