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Thank Heavens, the Winter That Bit Is Bygone

Thank heavens, the winter that bit is bygone. Winter frost chilled gout-ed limbs, wrinkled all crooked fingers severely knotted with revolting ink blue veins. Movements became a luxury of room heaters. Thank heavens, the winter that bit is gone ! Love and passion had gone low in profile rigid against frigid cold-heart ed winter, warmth had dulled down in tiny dots, unseen Thank heavens for the winter begone! The sober siblings,the purring cats and the bored puppies now peer slowly out of shut window panes in bright hopes of spotting long gone glowing brightness They too sigh, thank heavens, the winter that bit is gone. I can hear colors knocking at my door fragrances slowly permeating air, faintly though a warm ray of sun stroking my sleepy senses to rise and shine Thank heavens my beloved spring is here. 28.01.2013,

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Date: 2/4/2013 10:49:00 AM
Congratulations on your fine win, Mehnaz! Annalise
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Date: 2/7/2013 9:20:00 PM
thanks Annalise
Date: 2/4/2013 9:09:00 AM
One of my personal favorites, congrats
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Date: 2/7/2013 9:21:00 PM
thanks Richard..
Date: 2/4/2013 8:38:00 AM
Congratulations Mahnez xx
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Date: 2/7/2013 9:22:00 PM
thanks Mandy
Date: 2/4/2013 6:41:00 AM
congrats on your win Mehnaz
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Date: 2/7/2013 9:23:00 PM
thanks Joseph
Date: 2/4/2013 1:55:00 AM
"I can hear colours knocking at my door..." Oh I love that line. Well done and Congratulations on your win Mehnaz!! Big hugs,deb
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Date: 2/7/2013 9:24:00 PM
thanks Deb..
Date: 2/3/2013 10:55:00 PM
congrats Mehnaz on your win in my contest
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Date: 2/3/2013 11:35:00 PM
Thank You , Francine.......
Date: 2/3/2013 10:10:00 PM
Hello Mehnaz, , Congratulations with your wonderful poem ~ Always~ LINDA
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Date: 2/3/2013 11:36:00 PM
thanks linda...
Date: 2/3/2013 4:15:00 AM
Great write!
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Mehnaz Veetil
Date: 2/3/2013 11:36:00 PM
thanks Vesna...
Date: 1/29/2013 11:40:00 PM
and about my pinky winky. Yes, my mom really threw him away and I was not even able to go rescue him from the trash because the garbage man already had taken him away. I can't believe my mom threw him away. Why couldn't she just have thrown him in the wash machine?? My mom never cared about toy animals the way I did! even today, she does not even like pets!!
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Date: 1/31/2013 3:01:00 PM
am really sorry about that...
Date: 1/29/2013 11:38:00 PM
wow, I love how you did your winter begone poem. Splendid job of this challenge!!
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Date: 1/31/2013 3:00:00 PM
Thanks Andrea...
Date: 1/29/2013 7:23:00 PM
I fully agree, winter begone! I hope you entered in the contest, it is very good.
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Date: 1/29/2013 11:11:00 PM
yes Richard,I did .Thank you....
Date: 1/29/2013 7:58:00 AM
surely a winner...thanks for the visit...:)))
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Date: 1/29/2013 11:12:00 PM
Thanks Irfana....
Date: 1/28/2013 2:32:00 PM
Reads like a winner ...Enjoyed reading this afternoon..Thanks for stopping by..May your work be in the top of winners' list..Sara
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Date: 1/28/2013 10:46:00 PM
Thank you Sara , I am glad you liked it...
Date: 1/28/2013 1:50:00 PM
Hello Mehnaz, thank you for the sweet hi. I'm loving your poem, and the excitement you share knowing winter is gone. I love Spring. Soon everything will be back to normal. and life will exceed no boredom for many months to come... well only till winter blocks it all. Lovely praise to the heavens... *always~ :-) PD
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Date: 1/28/2013 10:44:00 PM
Thank you so much for the prayers...love and hugs....

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