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Than-Bauk's 1

River in spate Ruler’s great speech Our fate unhinged. Afternoon sun Only son comes When none expects. The pain that sends A chill bends will And rends the heart.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 8/13/2011 12:06:00 PM
Most profound one of the bunch. Congrats on your win!
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Date: 8/12/2011 5:19:00 PM
Congrats on your win...Sara
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Date: 8/12/2011 3:29:00 AM
hey Jag, congrats on your win David
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Date: 8/11/2011 11:13:00 PM
I am stopping by this evening to thank you for your kind comments while the soup is up and running. I will never get caught up oh well that's life right? Have a wonderful evening Jag. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/11/2011 10:21:00 PM
Cool idea Jagathsimhan. Agape, Moses
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Date: 8/11/2011 7:45:00 PM
congratulations to you S. On your win here
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Date: 8/11/2011 7:42:00 PM
Congrats Jag on your solid win with new form and great poetry ..sweet victory luv..
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Date: 8/11/2011 7:10:00 PM
Congratulations on your well deserved win in Dr. Ram Mehta's "Than-Bauk" contest Jag. Love,Carol
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Date: 8/11/2011 6:30:00 PM
Congratulations on the win in my contest, S.nair
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Date: 8/9/2011 2:16:00 AM
the middle one is my favorite. Great job for the contest, S!
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Date: 8/8/2011 5:46:00 PM
Jag these Than-Bauk's are phenomenal luv.. good luck in the contest..luv the reference in the second verse.. awesome for sure..luv..
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Date: 8/8/2011 4:58:00 PM
Thanks for the entry, S.nair
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Date: 8/8/2011 3:28:00 PM
a wonderful, initmate expression of what must lie within your heart and pen, jag... fascinating! best of winning luck! :) huggs, nette
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