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Tender Moon -- a Nonet

The amber moon fills up the silence It seems to know my heart's despair So fair, it lights my window and helps my heart repair. It shares a soft smile, while, blankets, gold are tossed with tender care
_________________________ 6/3/14 For Freddie V's contest: Nonet

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 7/16/2014 10:35:00 AM
Love the feel of this one :)
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Date: 6/9/2014 9:39:00 AM
CARRIE, Congratulations, on your awesome winning poem... LUV -LINDA-
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Date: 6/8/2014 11:54:00 PM
Congratulations on your win ! :) Wishes---
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Date: 6/5/2014 10:42:00 PM
Congratulations on a fine win with this perfect Nonet, carrie
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Date: 6/5/2014 9:38:00 PM
congrats on your win with this gorgeous poem. Like an idiot, I forgot to enter my own poem into his contest. hahaha.
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Date: 6/5/2014 10:45:00 AM
Congrats on your win...beautiful poem!
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Date: 6/5/2014 8:34:00 AM
What a great nonet Carrie ! Congrats on top win !
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Date: 6/5/2014 8:15:00 AM
Freddie has excellent taste, congratulations on a fine win.
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Date: 6/5/2014 8:08:00 AM
Back again to congrat you on your wonderful win, and still wonderful poem, yay :)
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Date: 6/5/2014 7:31:00 AM
congrats!
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Date: 6/5/2014 6:19:00 AM
Congrats on your much deserved win, Carrie!!... Such a beautiful write!.... Arlene
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Date: 6/5/2014 4:34:00 AM
Lovely poem... great imagery and a wonderful flow / rhythm. Congratulations on your win!
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Date: 6/5/2014 3:35:00 AM
A lovely nonet Carrie...it flowed so well...congrats Tim
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Date: 6/5/2014 2:32:00 AM
I love your tender, caring moon, Carrie! ... the perfect amber embalmer. Congrats on a deserved win. // paul
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Date: 6/4/2014 6:04:00 PM
OOh such a beautiful sight, the amber moon, you have spoke lovely of it :) I can close my eyes and see it perfectly because of you. Well done. Good luck in the contest your poem is great :)
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Date: 6/4/2014 1:35:00 PM
Ahh that amber moon..with the comfort it brings.So beautiful this is sweet Carrie.I was abroad for a holiday..trying to catch up where I left.Happy belated birthday ..God bless you xx
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