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Tender Green

As the Crow soars across the gray sky And lands 'pon Pecan Tree Whose tender green sways with the breeze And Crow's caw floats with ease I shiver in my thin nightcoat Though it is not that cold Princess shivers with me in her coat Rooster's crows float bold Such a gray morn dripping damp Sunshine's brightness hidden Like a wick without kerosene Or kisses forbidden Just for fun on a gray day!!!

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Bl Devnath

Date: 5/10/2013 4:46:00 PM

It's funny indeed and enjoyed. Loved always, bl

Richard D Seal

Date: 5/9/2013 6:21:00 AM

This is certainly unfinished work Sara, You can definately take this somewhere, grey beginnings to ......................, would love to see an ending on this. Take care, Richard

Richard D Seal
Date: 5/9/2013 1:54:00 PM

Hi Sara, it seems you took this comment the wrong way, I actually like this very much, I do not see anything I've put to suggest otherwise, in fact this piece struck me as the start of an epic and great work, so well written.

Lucilla Carrillo

Date: 5/8/2013 3:05:00 PM

Thanks for sharing this one. Tender Green. I like the pecan tree and I love pecans. My Mom planted a pecan tree at my brother's house and 5 years ago - it started giving fruiot. Have a great day... Lucilla

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/8/2013 12:11:00 PM

just for fun, but pretty darn good, Sara!

Tim Ryerson

Date: 5/8/2013 3:21:00 AM

'Like a wick without kerosene' Wow...It's been rather chilly here in LA too...VERY unusual weather! That very wise and famous 'expert' Mr. Al Gore would blame it on Global Warming...He should know...After all he invented the Internet didn't he?

Joseph May

Date: 5/7/2013 2:57:00 PM

nice imagery of a winter day....nicely penned..

Ndaba Sibanda

Date: 5/7/2013 11:47:00 AM

Enjoyed reading your poem.

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 5/7/2013 10:54:00 AM

Ethereal verse floating above the morn dew! Thank for visiting!

Russell Sivey

Date: 5/7/2013 9:07:00 AM

I love this grey day inspirational write my friend! You have presented a tremendous and delightful poem this morning! This is such an illuminating piece, I love the crow...it adds a great dimension to the poem, Great Work!!

Donna Jones

Date: 5/7/2013 7:39:00 AM

Lovely Sara...it's the same here today..let's hope the sun breaks thru!