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Tender Green

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Below is the poem entitled Tender Green which was written by poet Sara Kendrick. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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Tender Green

As the Crow soars across the gray sky
And lands 'pon Pecan Tree
Whose tender green sways with the breeze
And Crow's caw floats with ease 

I shiver in my thin nightcoat
Though it is not that cold
Princess shivers with me in her coat
Rooster's crows float bold 

Such a gray morn dripping damp
Sunshine's brightness hidden
Like a wick without kerosene
Or kisses forbidden

Just for fun on a gray day!!!

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  1. Devnath Avatar
    BL Devnath
    Date: 5/10/2013 4:46:00 PM
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    It's funny indeed and enjoyed. Loved always, bl
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    Richard D Seal
    Date: 5/9/2013 6:21:00 AM
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    This is certainly unfinished work Sara, You can definately take this somewhere, grey beginnings to ......................, would love to see an ending on this. Take care, Richard

    Seal Avatar Richard D Seal
    Date: 5/9/2013 1:54:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Hi Sara, it seems you took this comment the wrong way, I actually like this very much, I do not see anything I've put to suggest otherwise, in fact this piece struck me as the start of an epic and great work, so well written.
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    John Loving III
    Date: 5/8/2013 4:13:00 PM
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    Funs over . Don't play with a good beggining develop it into a masterpiece .
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    Lucilla Carrillo
    Date: 5/8/2013 3:05:00 PM
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    Thanks for sharing this one. Tender Green. I like the pecan tree and I love pecans. My Mom planted a pecan tree at my brother's house and 5 years ago - it started giving fruiot. Have a great day... Lucilla
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    Andrea Dietrich
    Date: 5/8/2013 12:11:00 PM
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    just for fun, but pretty darn good, Sara!
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    Tim Ryerson
    Date: 5/8/2013 3:21:00 AM
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    'Like a wick without kerosene' Wow...It's been rather chilly here in LA too...VERY unusual weather! That very wise and famous 'expert' Mr. Al Gore would blame it on Global Warming...He should know...After all he invented the Internet didn't he?
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    Joseph May
    Date: 5/7/2013 2:57:00 PM
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    nice imagery of a winter day....nicely penned..
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    Ndaba Sibanda
    Date: 5/7/2013 11:47:00 AM
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    Enjoyed reading your poem.
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    Demetrios Trifiatis
    Date: 5/7/2013 10:54:00 AM
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    Ethereal verse floating above the morn dew! Thank for visiting!
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    Russell Sivey
    Date: 5/7/2013 9:07:00 AM
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    I love this grey day inspirational write my friend! You have presented a tremendous and delightful poem this morning! This is such an illuminating piece, I love the crow...it adds a great dimension to the poem, Great Work!!
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    Donna Jones
    Date: 5/7/2013 7:39:00 AM
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    Lovely Sara...it's the same here today..let's hope the sun breaks thru!