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Tender Green

As the Crow soars across the gray sky
And lands 'pon Pecan Tree
Whose tender green sways with the breeze
And Crow's caw floats with ease 

I shiver in my thin nightcoat
Though it is not that cold
Princess shivers with me in her coat
Rooster's crows float bold 

Such a gray morn dripping damp
Sunshine's brightness hidden
Like a wick without kerosene
Or kisses forbidden

Just for fun on a gray day!!!

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  1. Date: 5/10/2013 4:46:00 PM
    It's funny indeed and enjoyed. Loved always, bl

  1. Date: 5/9/2013 6:21:00 AM
    This is certainly unfinished work Sara, You can definately take this somewhere, grey beginnings to ......................, would love to see an ending on this. Take care, Richard

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    Date: 5/9/2013 1:54:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Hi Sara, it seems you took this comment the wrong way, I actually like this very much, I do not see anything I've put to suggest otherwise, in fact this piece struck me as the start of an epic and great work, so well written.
  1. Date: 5/8/2013 4:13:00 PM
    Funs over . Don't play with a good beggining develop it into a masterpiece .

  1. Date: 5/8/2013 3:05:00 PM
    Thanks for sharing this one. Tender Green. I like the pecan tree and I love pecans. My Mom planted a pecan tree at my brother's house and 5 years ago - it started giving fruiot. Have a great day... Lucilla

  1. Date: 5/8/2013 12:11:00 PM
    just for fun, but pretty darn good, Sara!

  1. Date: 5/8/2013 3:21:00 AM
    'Like a wick without kerosene' Wow...It's been rather chilly here in LA too...VERY unusual weather! That very wise and famous 'expert' Mr. Al Gore would blame it on Global Warming...He should know...After all he invented the Internet didn't he?

  1. Date: 5/7/2013 2:57:00 PM
    nice imagery of a winter day....nicely penned..

  1. Date: 5/7/2013 11:47:00 AM
    Enjoyed reading your poem.

  1. Date: 5/7/2013 10:54:00 AM
    Ethereal verse floating above the morn dew! Thank for visiting!

  1. Date: 5/7/2013 9:07:00 AM
    I love this grey day inspirational write my friend! You have presented a tremendous and delightful poem this morning! This is such an illuminating piece, I love the adds a great dimension to the poem, Great Work!!

  1. Date: 5/7/2013 7:39:00 AM
    Lovely's the same here today..let's hope the sun breaks thru!