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Ten-Thousand Words

I would write ten-thousand words, If I could make you see-- The beauty of the sky, and birds, And how you look to me. Yet my words are frail, and weak, As they stumble and they fall-- For there is no word for such as you... There are no words, at all. --Mel

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 1/10/2015 1:44:00 AM
Lovely little poem, Mel! :) john.
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Mel Merrill
Date: 1/10/2015 1:20:00 PM
Hi Barbara. Thank you for reading and liking. How's '15 going for you? Well, I hope. Hugs!
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Mel Merrill
Date: 1/10/2015 1:19:00 PM
Thank you, John :)
Date: 1/9/2015 8:54:00 PM
So glad your back and bringing such beautiful work...this is outstanding. To my favs. BG
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Mel Merrill
Date: 1/10/2015 1:25:00 PM
Hi Barbara--put my reply in the wrong place. Thanks for the read and kind words, my friend. I hope '15 is going well for you...hugs, mel
Date: 1/9/2015 8:33:00 PM
wonderful! so simple and so perfect!
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Mel Merrill
Date: 1/10/2015 1:27:00 PM
Than you, ilene. I appreciate your kind and generous feedback as always...hugs, mel
Date: 1/9/2015 6:42:00 PM
That is beautiful :)
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Mel Merrill
Date: 1/10/2015 1:28:00 PM
Thanks babe. I hope '15 is going well for you...hugs, Mel. Keep in touch xo

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