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Temporary Insanity - For Contest

Temporary Insanity – for contest Arousal’s Beasts Contained Demanding Escape, Freedom, Gushing Hunger’s Insatiable Jaws Kissing Lasciviously Moistened Need’s Openness, Puffed Quiff, Red Softness, Tender Undulating vibrations, Wanton Xenogamy’s Yearning Zone. 9/25/2015 submitted to – Sensual ABC”s – poetry contest

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David Mohn

Date: 9/30/2015 12:32:00 PM

This is an interesting and descriptive take John...would have loved to see you try and post a picture with this :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/29/2015 3:35:00 PM

wow, Temporary insanity is RIGHT!

James Inman

Date: 9/29/2015 1:25:00 PM

Nice ABC John. Sexy.

Carrie Richards

Date: 9/27/2015 4:18:00 PM

This form is so tough.....I pondered too long, and didn't get my thoughts in time. But after seeing yours, it would be hard to beat !! Good luck, John!! And ps.....thanks so much for placing my poem in your "oldies" contest! Wow, you got some terrific poems. I loved Viv's 1st place poem !!

Robert Lindley

Date: 9/27/2015 2:01:00 PM

Looks hard. I guess, I will not attempt it myself. Good luck..

Eve Roper

Date: 9/26/2015 10:54:00 PM

Good job, John, you did cover all the alphabet!!! A 7 sir and good luck :~)

Jill Spagnola

Date: 9/26/2015 12:43:00 AM

I think I shall take me a cold shower! Truly emotive piece with this difficult form :), jill

John Lawless
Date: 9/26/2015 7:42:00 AM

Thanks Jill, the keyboard was blushing as I frantically "typed".

Caycay Jennings

Date: 9/25/2015 9:34:00 PM

Very good, John. I hope you enjoyed the attempt as much as I did. Good job ... CayCay

Caycay Jennings
Date: 9/29/2015 11:49:00 AM

Very amusing - I'm grinning big time ... CayCay

John Lawless
Date: 9/26/2015 7:41:00 AM

Well CayCay the climactic "XYZ" frenzy almost killed the moment....

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/25/2015 9:29:00 PM

oh my gosh, I should just hand you the prize. I am having such difficulty with this one, John. I have a very lame one right now. I will post it later unless I can think up a good one!

John Lawless
Date: 9/26/2015 7:39:00 AM

They are pesky little tormentor's Andrea. Good luck with your entry..