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Tears of Blood-Collab

Relentlessly watching you leave My heart starts pounding away My eyes then begin to bleed As my life slowly slips into decay Blurry eyed I look to the ground Tears leaving scars as they run down my face A blackend heart is all thats left to be found As our love is now gone without a trace Now if you could only feel The pain that rips at my heart This love loss that is so unreal Making me want to just tear you apart Pondering the day I may see Tears of blood flowing down from your eyes Would bring such a pleasure to me With a hope that those tears will never dry
11-17-11 Collaboration: A special thanks to Cali Mitchell For sharing her thoughts and mind with mine :o)

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Date: 12/9/2011 1:09:00 PM
I can print this one out and put it in many mailboxes lol Such a good way to express your self my friend... Michael
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Dan Kearley
Date: 12/9/2011 1:58:00 PM
I think it all came through with the help of Cali...She brought it out.Thanks for the compliment. :-)
Date: 11/24/2011 10:34:00 AM
SOME TIMES THE PAIN IS MORE THAN WE CAN STAND, AND THAT'S WHEN WE SEEK A LOVING HAND, SOMEONE WHO WILL CONSOLE THE HEART AND NOT LEAVE IT TORN APART
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Dan Kearley
Date: 11/30/2011 11:35:00 AM
So true..Indeed.
Date: 11/22/2011 2:44:00 PM
So many feeling with hearts ript apart...is pain as well as joy what feeds the pen to move and make poets of us all?
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Dan Kearley
Date: 11/30/2011 11:37:00 AM
Yes! So much emotion behind the pen...
Date: 11/22/2011 8:22:00 AM
Very sad, I love the second stanza!
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Dan Kearley
Date: 11/30/2011 11:37:00 AM
Thank you :o)
Date: 11/21/2011 7:34:00 PM
Vindictive guy you are! I understand that feeling of satisfaction you express so well.
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Dan Kearley
Date: 11/30/2011 11:38:00 AM
Awwwe.Thanks :o)
Date: 11/20/2011 10:30:00 AM
wow really awesome ending i am happy to see people add twisted endings to thier poetry
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Dan Kearley
Date: 11/30/2011 11:39:00 AM
Thank you very much!
Date: 11/18/2011 10:08:00 AM
YEP I FELT LIKE THAT TOO THEN I STARTED LOVING ONLY MYSELF LMAO =)
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Dan Kearley
Date: 11/30/2011 11:40:00 AM
We all went thru that I think...
Date: 11/18/2011 5:49:00 AM
wow,,i loved it,,wonderful to read words of love and emotion,,,my favorite...thanks for reading my poems,,and thanks for all your comments,,you guys have been so nice to me here at ps....
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Dan Kearley
Date: 11/30/2011 11:41:00 AM
Your works are great!
Date: 11/17/2011 7:44:00 PM
Great work by the two of you, powerful feelings being dealt with here.
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Dan Kearley
Date: 11/21/2011 11:01:00 AM
I meen the powerful feelings.
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Dan Kearley
Date: 11/17/2011 8:25:00 PM
I'd say.... :o)
Date: 11/17/2011 11:10:00 AM
wow, well penned ( typo line 6, scares should be scars, scares is to be afraid, scars is to mar) I can't remember the last time I wrote anything intense, great job
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Dan Kearley
Date: 11/17/2011 11:59:00 AM
Thank you so much for catching that for me. I do slip up... :-) Whats in my mind doesn't always type like it should.
Date: 11/17/2011 9:55:00 AM
oh this is so good...keep on writing
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Dan Kearley
Date: 11/17/2011 9:58:00 AM
Thank you very much! All comments very much apprereciated.

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