Tears In Heaven

Lovebirds sing a duet up in the clouds
tulips pucker up to kiss the butterflies,
I am surrounded here by serene beauty
with the tears of heaven in my eyes.

Where bright rainbows never fade away
and stars twinkle in the moonbeams,
yet, what is all of this beauty worth
if there is no one to share my dreams.

Still, you shall find me there someday
and maybe want to stay for awhile,
making sure that my tears in heaven
accompany only laughter and a smile.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013


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Date: 3/14/2014 6:28:00 PM
This is filled with beauty the heart yearns for. Blessings to you Kelly. Wonderfully written.
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Date: 3/15/2014 5:15:00 PM
Thank you so much, Connie! I'm happy that you enjoyed my poem. Your comments meant a lot to me! :)
Date: 11/27/2013 7:33:00 PM
Kelly You are an expert when it comes to writing with feeling and touching the readers heart. This is so sweet and loving. Nice job Thanks for the kind words on my Holiday Wishes write.
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Date: 10/10/2013 4:58:00 PM
Kelly,, love the double impact winning poem... xox~ Linda
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Date: 10/6/2013 2:22:00 AM
You did it really well my dear friend Kelly! Absolutely great! Kudos! My hearty congratulations on your well-deserved great win! love lots and big hugs, Leonora
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Date: 10/5/2013 8:27:00 PM
Kelly your poem is awesome... congrats ! ......... love ~SKAT~
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Date: 10/5/2013 6:24:00 AM
Tear in the heaven,smile and company all are different but you gather them in a line.Loved your wining piece
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Date: 9/29/2013 11:45:00 AM
Excellent, Kelly. Great job. Congrats. luv, Ralph
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Date: 9/28/2013 9:10:00 PM
beautiful poem....congrats on your win!
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Date: 9/28/2013 7:08:00 PM
Congrats on the win in the contest, Kelly
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Date: 9/28/2013 2:11:00 PM
Kelly, love your winning poem ......... LOVE ~SKAT~
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Date: 9/28/2013 9:45:00 AM
A beloved poem this should be.......it deserves to be kept in a special place......to bring a smile....without a tear, I pray!
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Date: 9/28/2013 5:14:00 AM
Congrats on the win in the contest, Kelly
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Date: 9/27/2013 7:44:00 PM
Kelly, , Congratulations on your "Beloved Poem" win. xox~ LINDA
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Date: 9/20/2013 8:16:00 AM
congratulations ....heartfelt.........SKAT
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Date: 9/16/2013 6:21:00 AM
Very well written rhyme and elegant flow. Congratulations on your well deserved win :)
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Date: 9/16/2013 4:33:00 AM
What is the point if we can't share our dreams? Happy I had the chance to share in the beauty of this write. Well done and big congrats! Hugs
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Date: 9/15/2013 7:35:00 PM
Congrats, great job. Ralph
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Date: 9/15/2013 4:25:00 AM
nice one. Congrats on your win.Morgan
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Date: 9/15/2013 3:52:00 AM
Congrats on your first place win in the contest, KELLY
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Date: 9/14/2013 6:33:00 PM
Enjoyed reading your winning work..Our tears are stored away in bottles in heaven..Congrats on your engaging winning work..Sara
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Date: 9/14/2013 6:01:00 PM
Hi Kelly, Again you are doing amazing in these contest. I love your style. CONGRATULATION!!! Thanks for supporting my contest with this amazing poem and imagery. If you'd like:-) stop by my latest poem ""The Wind."" OR blog! "Tears in Heaven" http://www.poetrysoup.com/poetry_blogs/blog_detail.aspx?BlogID=15911&PoetID=18720 --take care Always & Forever <3 Linda
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Date: 9/11/2013 5:33:00 PM
You have a definite talent and flair for rhyme, and I very much appreciate that. I am a "hard-core" rhymer lol so this made me happy :)
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Date: 9/10/2013 9:22:00 AM
Kelly, you always paint such exquisite pictures with words! What a gem! Verse two is very profound as well.
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Date: 9/9/2013 12:45:00 PM
Beautiful! :o)
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Date: 9/7/2013 10:56:00 AM
This displays the talent you are blessed with and adds to your legacy that will tell the world that you were here. Your poems will always live in the hearts of those you leave behind. You can be proud... I love your writing.... Jake
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