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Tears From My Window

I stood alone by a wall that was grey... I tried to remember a different day... With my hands I sketched a window to maybe see... I felt the cool breeze as the drawing flowed free... But all I saw was a picture of pouring rain... And only myself with a paper umbrella as my friend... I stepped closer to blow a kiss and make for me a sun... But then the sky melted and the scene made a run... It washed down the wall and at my feet it wept... So I crawled back to bed where in the dark I never slept... As I dreamed awake the rain stopped with the window dry... But still the floor was drenched from a wall that cried...

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 4/23/2012 8:25:00 PM
Beautiful imagery Michael loved it, wonderful, Brenda : )
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Date: 4/23/2012 9:17:00 AM
nice rhyming
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Date: 4/23/2012 8:56:00 AM
Wow, Michael.. I love how you ended it! A very sad write, I can relate :(
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Date: 4/23/2012 5:42:00 AM
Wow!! What an ending!! This write really touched me my friend...Just keep on writing and be strengthened in the Lord... Love Diana
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Date: 4/22/2012 7:51:00 AM
Your work, more and more, leaves me speechless...such depth...intricately woven! Well Done... :) big hugs,love deb
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Michael J. Falotico
Date: 4/22/2012 8:01:00 AM
Thank you Hun!!! oxo
Date: 4/21/2012 1:14:00 PM
hey Michael the images here are just spot on my friend, cool words..have a great weekend..David
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Date: 4/21/2012 8:41:00 AM
I love the idea of a wall that cried.. so many ways to look at this one ;) hope you got the email I send earlier about the article.. love Wilma
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Date: 4/20/2012 9:36:00 PM
Excellent as always, Michael. Drenched with imagery!
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Date: 4/20/2012 6:39:00 PM
I really like the image of the wall that cried. Is it crying for you, or your loss, or a fiend? Makes one think.
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Michael J. Falotico
Date: 4/20/2012 6:40:00 PM
Thats the beauty of poetry. Your own conclusions or thoughts. Thanks Hun. xx
Date: 4/20/2012 5:22:00 PM
I enjoyed reading your nice poem today about the tears from your window. It was very captivating and imagitive.
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