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Teach Your Children Well (Thanks To C. S. & N.)

What can we should we tell of the beauty within which we dwell. The gift so soft and hard and complicated the mating dance in which we’re sated. As first bloom crosses childlike cheeks and fair heart doth skip a beat. Would it not be best for love to be described in loving ways in gracious sighs. The dew on brow, the stomachs turn the greatest God gift for which we yearn. Let the body temple be thus glorified let its given sanctity not be vilified. Each creature large and small loves. See this, look, fear not it’s from above.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 3/22/2010 6:19:00 AM
I loved this- bless you Deborah
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Date: 3/18/2010 5:18:00 PM
spiritual, and of course, who can top those boys! have seen them live, your poem does-im proud! (my favorite poet is Neil Young) jamey
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Date: 3/18/2010 12:58:00 AM
Thank you for your welcome blog comments Debbie.Rgds Brian & congrats on your recent contest success
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Date: 3/17/2010 5:49:00 PM
For if we can read and relate to have sympathy for acts of rape and the horrors of war can we not with understanding and comapssion view the love that's given each of you?
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Date: 3/17/2010 5:44:00 PM
Warm and expressive write. Keep the creative pen flowing. Sar
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Date: 3/17/2010 4:20:00 PM
Great inspirational poem, Deborah...Thanks for sharing it.....Peace, Audrey
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Date: 3/17/2010 11:54:00 AM
What a wonderful day it is today and it is a pleasure to have time to read some poetry today. I am happy that yours is amongst the ones I have read today Deb. Thank you for sharing your writing with us. This is the first I have been to the soup to read in a few days. I won't be on long but is better then not at all. Love, Carol
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Date: 3/17/2010 2:34:00 AM
A very nice approach of couplet on the beauty of habitat. Nice sharing this, Deborah. (^_^) Noel.
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Date: 3/17/2010 12:05:00 AM
Wonderful,,,,,,,,Beautiful....Charma.
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Date: 3/16/2010 7:49:00 PM
Fear not they will learn without ever reading anything. Good write Debbie.
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Date: 3/16/2010 7:17:00 PM
Wonderful write Debbie and really enjoyed dwelling on each couplet line.. fine elegance your words.. classic mastery..luv.. Linda-Marie..
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Date: 3/16/2010 4:23:00 PM
enjoyed reading today, great job
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