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'tasting Droplets - of You'

the night approached with the moon setting the scene the trees waving the day a gallant goodbye as you walk across the white sand with so much promise droplets of a forgotten swim glistening - highlighting overt parts of your body as you approach even a little slower every step makes my heart skip a beat involuntary movement as I edge a little closer my nipples respond unquestioned as suddenly the fabric seems too tight longing to have your hands all over my body rubbing up against your partly wet body everyone disappears as we finally stand in front of each other I can hardly move and all I want is to move closer closer to the promise of our bodies becoming one closer to your fluids mingling with mine as our lips finally meet my tongue melts away and all I can taste is you ©230320120930

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Date: 3/28/2012 6:15:00 AM
Wilma, your sweet innocent face belies the thoughts that swim in your mind. You take the subject and don't fool around; love the emotion in this steamy verse! Luv, Lizzie
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Date: 3/27/2012 8:41:00 PM
wow, WHAT inspired THIS. VERY sexy one, Wilma. is it in a contest or just one dying to be written? Great poem!!!
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Date: 3/25/2012 11:35:00 AM
What a magical, romantic evening, Wilma. I hope this is a recent memory and that you have someone special in your life. Read that you had the flu -- what a shame! Get well soon, my friend. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 3/25/2012 11:27:00 AM
Well your words just appeared in HOT RED with little signs of smoke rising!!! Whew!!! Ok now to your flu bug, you need Dr Michael in his white jacket to examine you lol. Feel better CapeTown Honey. Luv Michael
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Date: 3/23/2012 6:50:00 PM
phew....had to mop my brow....good one!! cheap thrill there! ;]
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Date: 3/23/2012 10:10:00 AM
so hot and passionate leaving nothing to be imagined, enjoyed the lovely write, jag
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Date: 3/23/2012 8:54:00 AM
A scorcher, Wilma. Great imaginative write. Love, daver
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Date: 3/23/2012 7:58:00 AM
Such a sweet Narrative piece Wilma.. Hugs xxx
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Date: 3/23/2012 7:58:00 AM
I am enjoying reading up on all the poetry I can today. I am happy yours was one that I was able to read today. The weekend is here and I must also make time for my family life. I will be back on Monday as usual and I wish you a beautiful weekend filled with renewed inspiration Wilma. Love, Carol
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Date: 3/23/2012 5:54:00 AM
Very passionate write by you Wilma.....enjoyed the read.
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Date: 3/23/2012 2:33:00 AM
Ohboyhoboyohboyyyyy!! Haha I am laughing aloud right now, I can imagine you :D! Epicfunnyepicfunnyepicfunny! Lol, I think I have the makings of someone who can hypnotize, lol--- hahaha. Did anybody hear you??? I hope not! Wouldn't want men in coats dragging you away-- and yes, the wonders of those 3 magic lines :D
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Kabuteng P.Ink K.
Date: 3/23/2012 3:41:00 AM
*whew* for the loud music then :D heehee
Date: 3/23/2012 2:17:00 AM
I did notice that, someone went hiding in the neighborhood, LOL!! Oh shucks that it did?? and ah good girl you are, don't want too man-y people getting too hot ;) + it's my honor to suggest the title ;).... and ah yes, what an epicfunny I had in writing that :) I know, it was too forced for epiphany but I still added it in :D if you say it fast enough it can sound that way. I think. o_O Thanks, happy you had a blast with my write, I had a blast writing it :D
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Wilma Neels
Date: 3/23/2012 2:27:00 AM
Stop foncusing me :( :D
Date: 3/23/2012 1:54:00 AM
Missy! I've said what I've needed to say about this poem already, so let me be succinct and just say--- Tsssss~~~~ ^_^ -- Happy to read this hottie sizzly melty mmm write here :D-- and wow, what an awesome title (I wonder why?? Kidding :D) --- ice, I need ice :D mwahugs!!
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