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Tangled Vines - Contest

When we weave life's garden We plant  Honesty to teach us whats right Lilly of the valley, to remind us,  no matter how small, we matter The Rose  to teach us love The proud Daffodil that says  who you are is important The Honeysuckle to bring the scent of happiness into our lives The Trees that remind us how insignificant we can look yet shelter us from sun and rain the tears and hopes. Always spreading out to protect us The actual Tangled Vine is a deadly act, huge thorns to hold its victim secreting an aesthetic to paralyze its prey sucking away life's blood. People can be like this in a controlling way luckily, most families, override this bringing up their children to be free thinkers with the ability to choose. Life is like a tangled vine. Sometimes suffocating when you want to be free, needed to hold you up when  life hurts. Penned July 1 2013

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Date: 7/1/2013 7:41:00 PM
This is well done and interesting and also full of thought. thank you for sharing and also for your comments.
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Seren Roberts
Date: 7/1/2013 11:25:00 PM
Thank you Cheri ...Seren
Date: 7/1/2013 11:58:00 AM
Absolutely beautiful! Best wishes. AO
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Seren Roberts
Date: 7/1/2013 11:27:00 PM
Thank you A.O. ......Seren
Date: 7/1/2013 9:10:00 AM
Beautiful !!!!!
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Seren Roberts
Date: 7/1/2013 11:26:00 PM
Thanks my friend .....Seren
Date: 7/1/2013 8:26:00 AM
so you don't like Tom Cruise's personality? How do you know his real personality? I don't think we can depend solely on the tabloids.
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Seren Roberts
Date: 7/1/2013 9:44:00 AM
wow Andrea you had me thinking then. Your right of course, I have observed him on chat t.v. shows and to be honest , he doesnt always shine. i will reserve judgement.... Seren
Date: 7/1/2013 8:25:00 AM
Seren, I really liked how you made this poem symbolic. I would like to see even more said about the vines. I think if you added just a few more lines about vines, we could guess from the poem that they were the family and friends of the poem. So creative!
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Seren Roberts
Date: 7/1/2013 9:44:00 AM
okies will try , thanks andrea ...Seren
Date: 7/1/2013 6:07:00 AM
I really enjoyed how you made plants all part of our lives, a very good and insightful write here this morning my friend! I doubt I could have come up with the intelligent and soulful look into the poem Seren! What a powerful piece, such a grand poem, Great Work!!
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