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“Mama, what happened to your smile? I haven’t seen it for a while” She looks at her and sighs “It’s been taken” He holds her trembling hand As he hopes to understand Where the love that they had Has been taken She tries to write a line Of the poems they called, “fine” But the grand thoughts that she had Have been taken She looks at the shining knife Wants to end to her sorry life Her passion and her desire Have been taken They all stand round her grave Each one trying to be brave She had given them all love But they had only taken. Eileen Manassian Ghali

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 1/21/2013 3:44:00 PM
I second the others, this piece is worthy of being entered. Based on the responses I have read your work has already been critiqued and the response has been positive. Take a chance, it is very empowering! Hugs Rick
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 1/22/2013 11:19:00 AM
Richard....thank you for being so supportive! It means the world to me! :) I just might...
Date: 1/20/2013 6:57:00 AM
Dear Eileen, Oh, how many times those scenes have been repeated but us, mortals, never learn till is too late! Dramatic but true verses that tear the heart to pieces amplified further when guilty as charged! Thank you for visiting. Sou stelno pola filia mazi me tin agape moy.
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 1/20/2013 7:36:00 AM
Thank you, my dear! :) You always buoy me up! Philakia! :) Please keep up the Greek. How I love this language! Then milao kala, ala...katalaveno ti les! ;)
Date: 1/19/2013 4:26:00 PM
A sad poem ..... everything is taken - Big hug / / Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 1/18/2013 6:30:00 PM
So nice to read your poetry this eve. Light & Love
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 1/18/2013 9:33:00 PM
Thanks, Debbie! Hugs!

Book: Shattered Sighs