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Take That

Playing off your intent, 
writhing as you plunder 
within the dank dampness,
the wanton wave
spray painting effigies like Pollack
pole axed in delight my pelvis rises…

With hands full of Adonis’s moons
parting the skin of your throat with pearly teeth,
clawing back, ripping wide the broad side
the effigy of a biblical God.

Breath warms the conical rises
fingers wind in the curls at the nape of neck,
the hollow of your throat,  a salt lick
capping the wave brings froth 
to the fecund cave of desire.

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  1. Date: 11/9/2012 8:08:00 PM
    Wow an amazing write Deb. Last one I am reading tonight. Tired and believe it or not -at 9- I am ready for bed. So have a nice weekend. love phyl

  1. Date: 11/7/2012 4:45:00 PM
    As per the last comment...I don't know know what you're trying to do either Deb!...Don't give a damn either...none of my beeswax or anyone else's...Heck, I think he's a sexy looking guy!...Um...wait a minute don't think...No, No!...I swear to God I never...Luv ya Deb! (in spite of the fact you're a big pain in the ass... LOL!) - Timothy H. Ryerson at your service madame

    Ryerson Avatar Tim Ryerson
    Date: 11/7/2012 4:49:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Forgot to tell's a done deal Deb!...Hope it's the one you makes a rather vague reference to life/death etc. so that's the one I picked
  1. Date: 11/7/2012 12:12:00 PM
    Erotica can be such a grey area, between strangers...I usually let Chris read whatever poems I have written for him or with him in mind, before I post them anywhere...common courtesy and all. Good poetry otherwise, Deborah. I can't help but wonder what exactly you are trying to do?

  1. Date: 11/7/2012 1:41:00 AM
    Whew!!...HOT! I'm envying Chris! Good stuff cher!...Brain lock on your Trinity contest so I entered an that a no-no?...Ouch! You didn't have to HIT me did you?...I'm wounded, don't you pity me? Now I'm gonna need one of your therapy sessions...

  1. Date: 11/7/2012 12:17:00 AM
    Dear Debbie,,,how are you.. hope everything is great with you,,,thank you for sharing your powerful poem..fantastic write!!! enjoyed !!! <3<3<3 SK

  1. Date: 11/6/2012 7:59:00 PM
    Powerful beyond words, awake oh night awake, enjoyed your poetry tonight, hugs vie

  1. Date: 11/6/2012 7:38:00 PM
    It is morning here --Nov 7th.

  1. Date: 11/6/2012 7:36:00 PM