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conch shell empty bleached nearly white universe design center dot evenly spaced planets clockwise enlarging spiraling universe sun center dot gray, tan swirling colors of Conch Shell soft delicate neutral For: Charles Henderson's String Haiku

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Kash Poet

Date: 2/5/2011 12:54:00 PM

This one is amazing Sara!Must be a winner in the contest!--kashinath

Carol Fillmore

Date: 2/3/2011 9:23:00 AM

really good one! best of luck in the contest Sara!

James Tate

Date: 2/3/2011 4:49:00 AM

Sara, let me quickly apologize for asking you to visit my dandelion poem, only too late to realize you had already done so. When you get my age you'll understand. Now to your Conch Shell--I love it. You've compared it to the universe in a clever way. Good show.

Gert W. Knop

Date: 2/1/2011 9:41:00 AM

Hi Sara, a nicely written Renga you have penned here (a "String Haiku" is called a Renga). Also you did not really follow the rules (5-7-5 Syllables), I enjoyed the read much! Keep your creative pen running and thank you for your kind comments!...Have a great week and best of luck in the contest!...Gert

John Freeman

Date: 1/31/2011 5:56:00 PM

BeaUTIFUL idea, Sara, Good luck in the contest. Agape, Moses

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/30/2011 8:36:00 PM

I really enjoyed this one, Sara. How nice it is. I was imagining that the conch shell had a design on it similar to the spiraling universe. Best of luck in the contest. It sure looks like a winner to me! Luv ,Andrea

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 1/30/2011 1:50:00 PM

Wonderful multiple haiku the theme being connected throughout, Sara. Good lucjk in the contest,

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 1/30/2011 1:43:00 PM

Wow!! I love the way you describe the swirling designs of both the conch shell and the Milky Way. Awesome, Sara. If this is for Charles' contest, he wanted four verses. Hope to see your poem in the winners' circle, dear. Love, Carolyn

Nette Onclaud

Date: 1/30/2011 1:29:00 PM

splendid array of haikus done with art and substance, sara... enjoyed this page with delight! best winning wishes.. hope you're fine! :) huggs, nette