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Swinging On a Star Tankas-3

“Swinging on A Star”-1 Oh “Bethlehem Star” Bright multi-faceted points Still shimmer from far Above my old aching joints Reminding me of His love. deborah burch© 07/22/2012 “Swinging On A Star”-2 Diamonds on blue Yours glimmering by the moon Is “Venus”…still true... Holding your heart, as I croon Sweet love songs in moonbeam hues. deborah burch© 07/22/2012 “Swinging On A Star”-3 Catching golden love, These moonbeams in a jar, You watch from above As if swinging on a star-- My "Mem'ry”…my love…you are. deborahburch© 07/22/2012

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Date: 2/3/2013 5:24:00 AM
these are wonderful Tankas, as i browse through your oldies...glad i did...
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Date: 7/22/2012 2:37:00 PM
I like the last Tanka the best! It shows off a better display of love in my view! Great compilation of poems my friend! You've done an excellent job! Awesome Work!!
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Deborah Burch
Date: 7/22/2012 2:51:00 PM
thank you dear Russell...:) hope you are well...love ya, deb

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