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I confess I've been known to partake Straight icing sans chocolate cake I concede I shall never be lean Pouring fudge without the ice cream It's apparent my tool-shed doth grow Baked cookies? Just gimmie the dough It is rumored that I often spread Peanut butter and jam (hold the bread) From grandma I would often cajole A sugar rush direct from the bowl (Rejecting her kit for caboodle Choosing filling minus the strudel) I eat healthy! Want some examples? Pay-Days contain protein that's ample Orange Slices provide Vitamin C Milky-Ways furnish Vitamin D Cavities? My molars are mature Cholesterol? I concur (THAT'S for sure) Gotta change before damage is done Take a walk? Um, later, Honey Bun...

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Date: 6/30/2016 1:32:00 PM
Sure you must spend all those calories! :D Congrats!
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Date: 6/30/2016 10:26:00 AM
Sweets for the sweet !!! It's my motto too !!! My motto is sugar, go figure!! No surprise, gimme pies! I scream for ice cream.....but you won the prize !!!! You always do !! Missed you my friend!
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Date: 12/3/2015 1:11:00 PM
Congratulations on the placement of the contest Tim.
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Date: 12/1/2015 12:11:00 PM
Congratulations on a "sweet" win, my friend! This sweet piece just have me craving everything that is made from sugar! When I have the urge, I just give in and worry about it later:-)LOL! Pandita
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Date: 11/29/2015 9:55:00 PM
Congrats on ur lovely win Tim with this great write!
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Date: 11/29/2015 3:18:00 PM
Congratulations TIM, skat
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Date: 11/29/2015 11:30:00 AM
Congrats on your win, Tim. Feel free to celebrate in some caramel peanut form or other- you deserve it. Regards, Viv
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Date: 2/18/2015 9:52:00 PM
Congrats TIM....pd
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Date: 2/15/2015 11:41:00 PM
Tim, CONGRATULATIONS, in Shadow's indulgence contest! -LUV- SKAT
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Date: 2/11/2015 2:39:00 PM
a sweet win many congrats:-) Hugs jan xx
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Date: 2/11/2015 12:24:00 PM
Always take the corner piece of the cake; has icing on the top and two sides. Sucks being a diabetic.
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Date: 2/11/2015 10:11:00 AM
Tim,For me a problem me a diabetic.congratulations on win..rajat
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Date: 2/11/2015 8:41:00 AM
Ha ha, sweet! Congrats!
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Date: 2/11/2015 8:38:00 AM
I loved your delightful winning entry Tim. Congrats!
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Date: 2/11/2015 7:13:00 AM
great humour Tim congrats on win hugs
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Date: 12/9/2014 10:19:00 AM
I like the humor, congrats on the win
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Date: 12/9/2014 10:05:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed your fun poem Tim
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Date: 12/8/2014 2:32:00 PM
mmmm a very sweet poem that made me smile:-) congrats:-) hugs jan xxx
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Date: 12/8/2014 2:11:00 PM
Ahhh so you cher- sweet! Congrad's on your win! Light & Love
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Date: 12/8/2014 12:02:00 PM
Tim, oops on the exercise, you got me sold on dessert. Thanks for entering the pie contest, truly wonderful submissions sent in.
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Date: 7/1/2014 6:06:00 AM
My kind of guy, Tim. You are as sweet as ever!
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Date: 6/12/2014 9:14:00 PM
Tim ... that is just about the most clever writing I've read in a long, long time! And .,. there's been a time in my life where I could most definitely identify with the content ! I thoroughly enjoyed this! Thank you for sharing. Jack C
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Date: 6/12/2013 9:06:00 PM
This is good Tim, and now you've made me want something sweet to eat. Congrats on your win! Love, Kim
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Date: 6/10/2013 1:56:00 PM
Tim........your poem is very sweet........... congrats!!! SKAT
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Date: 2/28/2013 9:22:00 PM
I like this poem of yours friend Tim, Is this for your birthday party? (^__^) I have peanut butter here and I already ate chocolate cake...forget about diet hahaha...thanks for sharing your sweetest poem. Have a good day! Love, Maria
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