Sweet Half and Half

Behind my house, sweet Pretty beckons me with leafy swaying arms, and I succumb. I go to where she stands and hear a hum. Examining the heart of her, I see a swarm of bees that hover happily. For what she has, they eagerly have come, and blossoms burgeoning now give them some. So common, yet peculiar is my tree. . . She ought to be a willow, so then why does an adornment of pink blossoms show on only graceful branches hanging low? However, her top limbs are poised high. That other half is reaching for the sky and wearing charms of white like flowered snow! July 11, 2012 for the 'COMPLETELY YOUR CHOICE (13)any form any theme' Poetry Contest of Brian Strand
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012


Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

12
Date: 9/22/2020 5:33:00 AM
This is beautiful and sings in whispers that enchant and awaken inspiration. I love it... You're a blessing to me, sweet Andrea. God bless you
Login to Reply
Date: 9/21/2020 3:21:00 PM
Ooh, I love this ode to your Pretty tree with the peculiar half and half attributes! Nice work with your Italian sonnet, which is just that much harder than an English one. I like how you mixed up the rhymes in the last 6 lines from the usual CDCDCD format. Congrats on #1 win!
Login to Reply
Date: 9/21/2020 1:59:00 PM
Many Congrats on your top notch win with this beautiful poem, Andrea.
Login to Reply
Date: 8/30/2012 10:01:00 AM
sounds like mistletoe to me Andrea but could be wrong, anyhow wonderful poem, love those first two lines.
Login to Reply
Date: 7/22/2012 2:29:00 PM
Well this IS a jewel and I'm sure we will all see you in the winners circle. Light & Love
Login to Reply
Date: 7/16/2012 1:31:00 PM
Good to see you've entered Craig's contest Andrea.. got to do well with this..!
Login to Reply
Date: 7/16/2012 10:18:00 AM
compelling yet tender in its expression, andie.. congrats!..:) hugggs
Login to Reply
Date: 7/16/2012 8:42:00 AM
Congratulations on your super well deserved win in Craig's "Sweet" contest Andrea. Love, Carol
Login to Reply
Date: 7/15/2012 7:06:00 PM
I love this poem and how you gave your tree a name and your descriptive write about her.......congrats on an awesome win! Hugs
Login to Reply
Date: 7/15/2012 5:50:00 PM
Hey,Congrats on your win in the contest!!!
Login to Reply
Date: 7/15/2012 1:40:00 PM
congratulations on your beautiful win.
Login to Reply
Date: 7/15/2012 1:13:00 PM
Andrea , congrats on your great win, loved it first time..David
Login to Reply
Date: 7/15/2012 8:38:00 AM
Can't get any sweeter than this! A beauty to enter in the contest with my best wishes Andrea! Luv, Lizzie
Login to Reply
Date: 7/14/2012 3:47:00 PM
A great entry Andrea. Sweet as its poet. Wonderful sonnet. Missing u but I am back. Luv n hugs Michael
Login to Reply
Date: 7/13/2012 2:17:00 PM
Interesting work..Leaves me with questions..Reads like a very unusual tree..Reads like winning material for the contest..Good luck in Craig's contest..Thanks for stopping by...Sara
Login to Reply
Date: 7/13/2012 2:16:00 PM
I love this tree sonnet, my friend - she sounds like a beauty : ) My favourite tree is quite hollow and would look dead if it didn't have leaves - it's rumoured to be a hanging tree
Login to Reply
Date: 7/13/2012 11:39:00 AM
Wonderful sonnet you have penned. I need to try and find time to try some new forms. Get stuck doing the same ones. Wrote a poem and lost it but luckily I wrote down most of it so will post it again this weekend. love phyl
Login to Reply
Date: 7/12/2012 3:28:00 PM
Very "sweetly" done, dear Andrea. Your sonnets always knock me out. Love, daver
Login to Reply
Date: 7/12/2012 1:03:00 PM
Sounds lovely!! And yes, it has been a while. I'm in zombie mode...work, work, work. I may be posting some weird poetry over the next few months. Ha. Always enjoy yours, Andrea!
Login to Reply
Date: 7/12/2012 1:35:00 AM
Love this SWEET poem very much Andrea!!A sure winner!
Login to Reply
Date: 7/11/2012 7:15:00 PM
How oh how can this not be a winner???!! This is such a beauty, Andrea! I love it!
Login to Reply
Date: 7/11/2012 5:27:00 PM
Sometimes blooming vines wend their way through tree branches as if they belonged there. My kitties in this poem were feral and i could not catch them and they ran when I opened the door. There was no way of getting them tamed. My daughter just brought over a trap to try to catch the lone survivor and get him taken care of and tamed if possible. My kitty that I have never goes out doors. There are jsut too many dangers around including very fast traffic. Joyce
Login to Reply
Date: 7/11/2012 5:22:00 PM
I enjoyed reading your poem, Andrea. You are such a talented lady. Best wishes in the contest. Love, Kim
Login to Reply
Date: 7/11/2012 4:44:00 PM
a lovely tribute to a strange "half and half" tree. i love the way you've rhymed this - very very nice1
Login to Reply
Date: 7/11/2012 3:38:00 PM
Andrea a great sonnet, I have seen trees that do this..David
Login to Reply
12
Get a Premium Membership
Get more exposure for your poetry and more features with a Premium Membership.
Book: Reflection on the Important Things

Member Area

My Admin
Profile and Settings
Edit My Poems
Edit My Quotes
Edit My Short Stories
Edit My Articles
My Comments Inboxes
My Comments Outboxes
Soup Mail
Poetry Contests
Contest Results/Status
Followers
Poems of Poets I Follow
Friend Builder

Soup Social

Poetry Forum
New/Upcoming Features
The Wall
Soup Facebook Page
Who is Online
Link to Us

Member Poems

Poems - Top 100 New
Poems - Top 100 All-Time
Poems - Best
Poems - by Topic
Poems - New (All)
Poems - New (PM)
Poems - New by Poet
Poems - Read
Poems - Unread

Member Poets

Poets - Best New
Poets - New
Poets - Top 100 Most Poems
Poets - Top 100 Most Poems Recent
Poets - Top 100 Community
Poets - Top 100 Contest

Famous Poems

Famous Poems - African American
Famous Poems - Best
Famous Poems - Classical
Famous Poems - English
Famous Poems - Haiku
Famous Poems - Love
Famous Poems - Short
Famous Poems - Top 100

Famous Poets

Famous Poets - Living
Famous Poets - Most Popular
Famous Poets - Top 100
Famous Poets - Best
Famous Poets - Women
Famous Poets - African American
Famous Poets - Beat
Famous Poets - Cinquain
Famous Poets - Classical
Famous Poets - English
Famous Poets - Haiku
Famous Poets - Hindi
Famous Poets - Jewish
Famous Poets - Love
Famous Poets - Metaphysical
Famous Poets - Modern
Famous Poets - Punjabi
Famous Poets - Romantic
Famous Poets - Spanish
Famous Poets - Suicidal
Famous Poets - Urdu
Famous Poets - War

Poetry Resources

Anagrams
Bible
Book Store
Character Counter
Cliché Finder
Poetry Clichés
Common Words
Copyright Information
Grammar
Grammar Checker
Homonym
Homophones
How to Write a Poem
Lyrics
Love Poem Generator
New Poetic Forms
Plagiarism Checker
Poetry Art
Publishing
Random Word Generator
Spell Checker
What is Good Poetry?
Word Counter