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Surprise,Surprise

You know that feeling you've been here before something is amiss but not knowing what uncertainty reigns- doubts surface, apprehensive I push the door very slowly- lights are low, nothing moves, music plays- Happy Birthday Sport!

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Date: 9/17/2008 12:20:00 PM
Congratulations Brian on your win in Kristin's contest! Extremely well deserved, of course! Love, Shar
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Date: 8/12/2008 4:29:00 PM
Wonderful build up of suspense and then the laugh as you prick the bubble. good one. Regards Heidie
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Date: 8/11/2008 10:34:00 AM
I did have one surprise party, and they are way too embarrassing for me! I don't even like making them as they are too nerve wracking as i am afraid I will slip and ruin the surprise! Did you have a birthday recently Brian? Happy belated if you did! Love, Shar
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