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Super Grouper, Sardine Party Pooper

Scuba diving, oh! what a dream In the Gulf, amidst the Sardines With a Florida blond Whom I've grown to be fond It's dark, is it all that it seems Our dive is going oh! so super Boo! said the nosey big Grouper Och! do you have to be mean To these little Sardines Your just a big party pooper Told of he goes in a mood Just like a big bully should Hey! next time take better care To these Sardines you did scare It's impolite, and you've been oh! so rude

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 6/5/2011 7:37:00 AM
James, Great to see in the winner's circle. Congratulations on a swell poem. Agape, Moses
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Date: 6/4/2011 1:00:00 PM
Good to se the winning spot you have taken in Carolyns contest James.
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Date: 6/4/2011 5:41:00 AM
congratulations on your win here James. Good one
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Date: 6/3/2011 11:16:00 PM
LOL, Congratulations on all your wins, James : )
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Date: 6/3/2011 4:40:00 PM
Congratulations on your win with this creative work..Sara
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Date: 6/3/2011 3:10:00 PM
Congratulations on the fifth place win in the contest of carolyn, James
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Date: 6/3/2011 2:35:00 PM
Dear James, I judged blindly and was so happy to see your name on the winners' list. Competition was awesome so feel proud. Congratulations! Fishing photos are posted on my blog. I kept looking at the sky hoping to see an eagle or and owglet passing by... Love, Carolyn
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Date: 6/3/2011 5:28:00 PM
Hiya Blondie, I'm glad I entered this one. Not to be placed 5th, but purely because it's your contest Carolyn. The result for me was you enjoying yourself, having awesome fun in doing what you love - fishing. Your back safe, that makes me smile - have a terrific weekend.....:) xxxx
Date: 6/3/2011 1:52:00 PM
Congratulations on your so wonderfully deserved win in Carolyn's "Attack" contest James. Love Carol
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Date: 6/3/2011 1:40:00 PM
Congraltulations James and I am glad that you and the blonde got away unscathed. Love, Joyce
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Date: 5/21/2011 4:32:00 AM
Scuba diving, I tried it once I took to it like a brain to a dunce
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Date: 5/20/2011 6:36:00 PM
love it!
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Date: 5/20/2011 5:24:00 PM
You have taken quite a humrous perspective on the theme, James
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