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Sunshine Visual

Slowly You light my life As morning gently breaks With warmth you thaw my frozen heart Sundrenched. --------------------------------------------------------- Contest: An American Beauty ~ Write like Adelaide Sponsor: Andrea Dietrich Placed: 2nd

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Julia Ward

Date: 3/16/2015 4:00:00 AM

"Sundrenched", the key word, ensured a high placement. Hugs, Julia, xx

Paul Callus
Date: 3/16/2015 10:41:00 AM

Short poems rely a lot on key lines or words; in this case 'sundrenched' served me well! Hugs // paul

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 2/2/2015 3:36:00 AM

Oh, I think I missed this one Paul. I am so happy to see it come in real high on the winner's list. Big congratulations my friend!

Paul Callus
Date: 2/3/2015 11:30:00 AM

Hi Connie! It's not the first time that I miss some really good poems, but then some of them do crop up again. Thank you for your support and congrats. // paul

Skat A

Date: 2/1/2015 2:33:00 PM

PAUL, CONGRATULATIONS on your win *Love Sweet* SKAT

Paul Callus
Date: 2/1/2015 3:38:00 PM

Thank you Skat....your visit IS appreciated! :)) // paul

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 1/29/2015 11:04:00 PM

How passionate Paul! Love the thawing of frozen heart,, Super 7,, congrats on big win!

Paul Callus
Date: 1/30/2015 9:22:00 AM

Thank you Upma.....love your comments ... and your visit:) All the best. // paul

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 1/28/2015 11:10:00 AM

Another fine piece my dear. You're just tearing it up !! Congrats. BG

Paul Callus
Date: 1/28/2015 12:54:00 PM

Thank you for your kind and lovely comments, Barbara! your homeward path is warm and inspiring. // paul

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders

Date: 1/28/2015 10:33:00 AM

I love your heartfelt interpretation of the picture, Paul...congrats on a wonderful win! Hugs, Rhonda

Paul Callus
Date: 1/28/2015 12:52:00 PM

Thank you Rhonda; I found your lavender sunset a delight to read. hugs // paul

Abdul Malik

Date: 1/26/2015 2:40:00 PM

Hey, you did pretty good. Happy for you.

Paul Callus
Date: 1/26/2015 2:49:00 PM

Many thanks, Abdul; enjoyed your winning entry, too. // paul

Kayod5 Kayode

Date: 1/26/2015 1:24:00 PM

Congrats Paul,sorry I would have got to you but very busy today-;I am happy this did so well and made us proud again...huggs

Paul Callus
Date: 1/26/2015 2:15:00 PM

Thank you Kayode for finding the time to stop by with nice congrats. There are priorities in life which must come first. hugs // paul

Sara Kendrick

Date: 1/26/2015 12:33:00 PM

!!! : > )...Way to go..Sara

Paul Callus
Date: 1/26/2015 2:26:00 PM

Thank you Sara....enjoyable coded message!:) // paul

Pandita Sietesantos

Date: 1/26/2015 11:52:00 AM

Hi Paul, just circling back with huge congratulations for this awesome piece which is so deserving of its high placement! Warmest regards. Pandita.

Paul Callus
Date: 1/26/2015 2:24:00 PM

Many thanks Pandita for revisiting with lovely congratulations:) Warm regards to you too. // paul

Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty

Date: 1/26/2015 10:14:00 AM

You light my life Paul through your poems.. Congrats on win. God bless. My reagrds..>rajat

Paul Callus
Date: 1/26/2015 2:44:00 PM

You are too kind, Rajat! Thank you! ...and God bless you, too. All the best. // paul

Poesy Relish

Date: 1/26/2015 5:41:00 AM

Congrats Paul on this well deserved win.. lov,nad!

Paul Callus
Date: 1/26/2015 2:50:00 PM

Thank you, Nadiya! Very nice of you to stop by:) hugs // paul

Arlene Smith

Date: 1/25/2015 7:09:00 PM

Back to congrat you on a great win, my friend!! Hugs... Arlene

Paul Callus
Date: 1/26/2015 2:42:00 PM

Thank you Arlene! Revisits mean a lot to me...a good sign! hugs // paul

Greg Hoffman

Date: 1/25/2015 6:32:00 PM

Congrats on your win in the contest.well done

Paul Callus
Date: 1/26/2015 2:58:00 PM

Thank you Greg; nice to see you on the winners' list, too! // paul

David Mohn

Date: 1/25/2015 4:02:00 PM

Back for congrats Paul...I knew this would find high placement...beautiful

Paul Callus
Date: 1/26/2015 3:05:00 PM

Thank you for revisiting and for the faith you had in this poem, David! All the best. // paul

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/25/2015 3:24:00 PM

I adore the last line of this one. Sundrenched is what I always wish to be in the summertime AND now in the winter, for sure. Awesome job, Paul. Congrats in my contest.

Paul Callus
Date: 1/26/2015 10:00:00 AM

Hi Andrea! I'm so pleased that you liked my entry! Thank you, especially for the high placing. I too am looking forward to warmer weather:) Have a lovely week, irrespective of cold weather! // paul

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 1/25/2015 3:18:00 PM

This is lovely, congratulations.

Paul Callus
Date: 1/26/2015 2:57:00 PM

Thank you Richard; your entry was one of the best, too! All the best. // paul

Sandra Haight

Date: 1/25/2015 3:09:00 PM

Paul, congratulations on your 2nd place win for your lovely Cinquain. Love your poem based on the visual. Sandra

Paul Callus
Date: 1/26/2015 2:55:00 PM

Thank you Sandra....you did very well yourself with a lovely podium finish! // paul

Rob Carmack

Date: 1/25/2015 2:12:00 PM

Congrats Paul.

Paul Callus
Date: 1/25/2015 3:03:00 PM

Thank you Rob; enjoyed your winning entry, too. All the best. // paul

Jan Allison

Date: 1/25/2015 1:36:00 PM

Dropping back with my congrats Paul:-) Hugs Jan xx

Paul Callus
Date: 1/25/2015 2:48:00 PM

Thank you Jan:) Congrats to you too. hugs // paul

Shadow Hamilton

Date: 1/23/2015 12:29:00 PM

sublime Paul gl in contest hugs 7

Paul Callus
Date: 1/23/2015 12:41:00 PM

So pleased you like, Shadow! Thank you. Have a nice weekend hugs // paul

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 1/20/2015 2:57:00 PM

Oh, I love the romance in this little beauty Paul. I hope this one comes in at the top!#7 for me.

Paul Callus
Date: 1/20/2015 3:50:00 PM

May your judgment come true, Connie! Thank you for the faith you show in these few lines...and for stopping by with a 7 rating! All the best. // paul

Maurice Yvonne

Date: 1/14/2015 5:31:00 PM

Great poetry Paul!

Paul Callus
Date: 1/15/2015 10:24:00 AM

Once again today...Thank you Armand!

Cherl Dunn

Date: 1/13/2015 1:19:00 PM

Although this might be a short poem it expresses so much, it is so full of warmth and says so much I'm glad I stopped and read it today, cheri

Paul Callus
Date: 1/13/2015 3:41:00 PM

I love your visits Cherl! they are warm and encouraging...thank you! I'm glad you stopped by....you're always welcome. // paul

Robert Lindley

Date: 1/12/2015 10:34:00 PM

Another gem my friend. So much said with so few words!----------------------- "She that stokes my fires,--------------- rarely ever tires-------------------------- of my imperfect little world-------------- when my love-bolts are hurled;--------- Kind words she so desires--------------- when at dawn---------------------------- we rekindle each others fires."---------- A7 my friend and good luck in the contest.

Paul Callus
Date: 1/13/2015 5:59:00 AM

Hi Robert! Thank you for the rating and for the lovely comments that are a poem in their own rights! It's always a pleasure to have you stopping by my friend. Have a nice day. // paul