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Sunset - One Liner

Silently the sun slinks down over the horizon leaving passionate beauty in her wake. 12/05/2015

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Date: 12/29/2015 9:57:00 PM
Awesome one liner!!
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Date: 12/9/2015 5:54:00 PM
A wonderful write Tim! Congrats on your win!
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Date: 12/8/2015 9:02:00 PM
A beautiful write, Tim! Congrats on your win! Love, Kim
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Date: 12/7/2015 7:46:00 PM
Yes, she does - very pretty ... CayCay
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Date: 12/7/2015 5:37:00 PM
Another beautiful sunset, describes in just one poetic line. Congrats on your fine win, Tim! Regards // paul
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Date: 12/7/2015 6:51:00 AM
Congratulations Tim.
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Date: 12/7/2015 12:35:00 AM
Congrats on great win with this amazingly beautiful write Tim!
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Date: 12/7/2015 12:35:00 AM
Congrats on great win with this amazingly beautiful write Tim!
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Date: 12/7/2015 12:33:00 AM
and I tried, all I could come up with was "Go Habs Go, Go Habs Go"
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Date: 12/7/2015 3:47:00 AM
How about..."Here come the Hawks, the.mighty Blackhawks "..lol
Date: 12/7/2015 12:32:00 AM
OK now leave it to you to come up with the ultimate romantic one liner! Well done!!!
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Date: 12/6/2015 9:37:00 PM
A marvelous beauty my dear friend, Tim! I love it. Many warm congrats on your win! <3 Leonora
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Date: 12/6/2015 6:47:00 PM
this one is so pretty, Tim!! Congrats.
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Date: 12/6/2015 6:44:00 PM
Lovely write Tim.
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Date: 12/6/2015 4:52:00 PM
Wow! What a beautiful piece. Congratulations on your win.........A.M.
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Date: 12/6/2015 2:44:00 PM
Nice imagery, Tim. Congrats on your fine win. Sandra
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Date: 12/6/2015 2:43:00 PM
Nice win, Tim...congratulations.
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Date: 12/6/2015 2:21:00 PM
Tim, Congrats on your one liner TWO win. SKAT
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Date: 12/6/2015 2:19:00 PM
Dropping back with my congrats Tim:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 12/6/2015 2:17:00 PM
- Congrats on your great "One Liners Two" image, Tim !!! - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 12/6/2015 12:33:00 PM
Tho I'm not fond ofone liners... You were still able to work miracles with this one. PS. Dragon has a new poem... He visited Harry Potter's Diagon Alley. Come see it!
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Date: 12/6/2015 7:22:00 AM
- This glows in the sunset, Tim - (I have a "one liner" me too :) - Good luck in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 12/6/2015 5:11:00 AM
oh a beauty of a line Tim:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 12/6/2015 12:41:00 AM
Can feel the warmth of the sun in it ..Lovely.
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Date: 12/5/2015 7:53:00 PM
ahhh, you did sun too!! I love that sun and this poem!
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