Sunset

Sunset... Sunset... The breeze at sunset is lovely, divine. The Drunken Swallows are flying in wine. Who else is flying? With me in colors! Hoping no one else ever discovers. My wings are aging, painful, and tired. Colors of sunset are much more desired. We become part of infinite wisdom. It doesn’t matter the ultimate kingdom. I am wondering what is in heaven, Sunset or sunrise, which has been given? Everything circles, a circle is hollow. If you are flying, fly with a swallow. 12/2015 Haloo

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Old Buck

Date: 10/27/2017 4:12:00 PM

Pashang: I enjoyed this. This is so descriptive and covers so many topics at once. Well done. Keep them coming and thanks for sharing them with all of us on the soup. oldbuck

Pashang Salehi
Date: 10/27/2017 11:13:00 PM

Thank you my friend...

Robert Nehls

Date: 2/13/2016 6:08:00 PM

Hi Pashang. Very descriptive, insightful and full of imagery. I enjoyed reading it. Thanks for sharing..... Robert.

Pashang Salehi
Date: 2/14/2016 8:52:00 AM

You are always welcome..

Sara Kendrick

Date: 2/1/2016 4:58:00 PM

Enjoyed reading this one..Very descriptive of a beautiful sunset..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara

Pashang Salehi
Date: 2/2/2016 12:48:00 AM

Thank you Sara, same to you.... you're always welcome here.

Don Johnson

Date: 1/30/2016 2:43:00 AM

Great poetry here old mate, written well just forst rate... i find..

Pashang Salehi
Date: 2/2/2016 12:49:00 AM

Thanks mate stop by anytime ............

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 1/8/2016 11:44:00 PM

Pashang, Congratulations on your -SUNSET- win..... Love LINDA

Pashang Salehi
Date: 1/12/2016 11:41:00 PM

Than you Linda for reading my work. You're so kind.

Jan Allison

Date: 1/1/2016 11:31:00 AM

Very beautifully penned Pashang congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx

Pashang Salehi
Date: 1/2/2016 1:07:00 AM

Thanks Jan... Happy new year

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 1/1/2016 10:54:00 AM

Congratulations and Happy New Year!

Pashang Salehi
Date: 1/2/2016 1:08:00 AM

Thanks Richard, Happy New Year.

Skat A

Date: 1/1/2016 10:19:00 AM

Pashang, Congratulations on your SUNSET win. Thank you for all the time you took supporting and entering my contest this past year 2015:-) I really enjoyed every entry. Please don't be upset if you are sharing a placement or did not make the top 10. I feel every poem, should have been placed higher. Stop by my latest Blog "On the first day of January - Next To Me" when you'd like or have time. Celebrate your win on the first day of January.... Have A Blessed Year. Love SKAT

Pashang Salehi
Date: 1/2/2016 1:07:00 AM

Thank you SKAT for considering my work. Happy new year.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 12/30/2015 12:19:00 PM

i love it... hope to see it in the sunset contest... linda

Pashang Salehi
Date: 12/30/2015 12:27:00 PM

Thank you Linda, this got rejected because it was not an old poem. Happy new year.