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Sunrise, Sunset

Today seemed so long, Now a day is almost gone, But its about to get so much better yet As I whatch the beautiful sun set. Sunrise, Sunset, How much better can it get? Up and down all day long, Now it's here, now it's gone I love the darling sunrise, Into it birds fly. I love it's colour's, purple, pink, It makes it much easier to think The sunrise marks a brand new day, How much more can I say? All those things that I haven't done, I can do at the rise of a sun. Sun burning in the sky, just a ball of gas. Just a burnng, spluttering, churning, great, big mass. Somehow it makes one feel calm, Like a very meaningful Psalm. I do like sunset, I whatched as the sun and horizon met. Then slowly,slowly still, They'll leave for now untill, The next day that will come yet! I do like sunrise although, I like sunset also! I cannot decide which is better, A sunriser or a sunsetter! S-U-N-S-E-T, I just cannot see, S-U-N-R-I-S-E What the difference can be! I will say, I like them both, This I swear, this I oath. There really is nothing better, Than a sunriser and a sunsetter

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Date: 5/7/2012 3:22:00 AM
Well written, good flow. I like this one a lot!
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Date: 4/6/2012 6:54:00 PM
Nice one! Nice flow, I love each line I read for what they hold. Welcome to the Soup dear, I love your work, please keep sharing your thoughts and inspiration here and enjoy the great company of the super poets. A warm welcome to you as I look forward to reading more of what God has blessed you to write. Love, Adeleke
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