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Sunlight Image

sunlight image on each incoming wave feel of salt water Russell Sivey Entered into Heather Ober's "Ocean-ku" contest 4/12/2013

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Tahera Mannan

Date: 4/25/2013 10:50:00 PM

feel of salt water, so beautiful Russell. Many congrats.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 4/24/2013 8:03:00 PM

Russell, a nice winning Ku' poem... Congratulations in Heather's lovely haiku contest. xox~ Linda

Donna Jones

Date: 4/23/2013 1:26:00 PM

I love this beautiful scene you created Russell...congratulations

Therese Bacha

Date: 4/23/2013 8:59:00 AM

Oh my friend, i can see the wave arriving to its destination looking great. You are perfect my friend, no book of poetry in your agenda? Russell you really should. Love Terry

Keith Bickerstaffe

Date: 4/18/2013 5:32:00 PM

Ahh! I can smell the sea and feel the sunshine... Well done Russ! Best wishes, Keith

Hgarvey Daniel Esquire

Date: 4/17/2013 11:56:00 AM

Dear Russell,Hope this finds YOU and YOURS Healthy and High in the Spirit. Very vivid.Congratulations. I have read a lot of the "Ocean-ku" entrees and I'm sure YOU will sit in Glory in the Winners Circle.Thank-YOU for my placement in YOUR Contest " Spring Showers " an my gratitude for YOUR Gracious Comments. Soup Mail Call LOVE ALWAYS and FOREVER YOUR Liege...HG

Skat A

Date: 4/13/2013 1:49:00 PM

Your haiku reflects perfect through the sun Russell, an excellent haiku all the way! Much Love and respect ~*~ SKAT

Jack Horne

Date: 4/13/2013 12:55:00 PM

awesome haiku, my friend

Sara Kendrick

Date: 4/13/2013 8:36:00 AM

Reads like a winner..Enjoyed reading this morn..Thanks for stopping by..Your comments are always appreciated..Yes, my work "Over Zealous" is out of character for me..The idea came from my husband..The Game Warden fell from a tree trying to catch someone doing something wrong and ended up disabled..Sara

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/13/2013 7:46:00 AM

Russell, this is a very pleasant image. I am loving these ocean haiku!

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 4/13/2013 5:49:00 AM

Vivid image of the sea!

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 4/12/2013 9:38:00 PM

nothing like a walk on the beach. Enjoyed going there in your poem. BG

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 4/12/2013 9:24:00 PM

Hello Russell, a nice walk on the beach... love the exfoliating feeling. Heather, is gonna love the haiku. A little suntan lotion will go great with the ocean-ku. good luck... Linda