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Sun-Moon

*BRIGHT MARBLES* the mirrored moonlight dips gently into the lake…. ripples in the night ~ sun sifts through the glade bright as a bashful lover…. sky wears a red face ~ face to face at dawn, morning sun chases the moon…. marbles share the sky For Linda Marie's Contest: "Hodgepodge-/Trio" SUN/MOON By Carrie Richards 1/20/12

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Samual Ronthorpe

Date: 2/5/2012 4:06:00 AM

Excellent write. Congrats on the win, it was well deserved.............S.Ronthorpe

Charlotte Puddifoot

Date: 1/31/2012 4:28:00 PM

congrats on your well deserved 1st place win, full of such beautiful imagery, as are all your poems :-)

Kim Merryman

Date: 1/31/2012 1:48:00 PM

I love the imagery you used in these haikus, Carrie. Congrats on your well deserved 1st place win. Love, Kim

Francine Roberts

Date: 1/31/2012 8:39:00 AM

lovely imagery Carrie, congrats on your first place win

Spandan Karmakar

Date: 1/31/2012 1:31:00 AM

Congrats on your win Carrie....spandan

Greg Stanley

Date: 1/30/2012 9:31:00 PM

Carrie, what a beautiful group of Haikus, congratulations on your big 1st place win, Greg

Bl Devnath

Date: 1/30/2012 8:49:00 PM

Many congratulation on your superb win, loved and enjoyed, bl

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/30/2012 3:43:00 PM

THis was MEANT to be first place. Outstanding and congratulations.

David Williams

Date: 1/30/2012 3:42:00 PM

Carrie congrats on your win, a worthy winner..David

Andrew Crisci

Date: 1/30/2012 3:05:00 PM

Congratulations on you first place, Carrie. It's an amazing entry with vivid images of the night sky fading into the dawn. Best wishes and God bless. Hugs, Andrew.

Gwendolen Song

Date: 1/30/2012 2:28:00 PM

Hey Carrie...this is exceptional with the sun and moon on a lover's chase! Congrats on creating such a whimsical write! Gwendolen

Jon Arno

Date: 1/30/2012 1:55:00 PM

Carrie, Congratulations on your win!!!! Jon

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 1/30/2012 1:46:00 PM

Congratulations on your super win in Linda-Marie's "Hodgepodge Trio"contest Carrie. Love, Carol

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 1/30/2012 1:09:00 PM

congrats Carrie on first place win .. magnificent entry ..thankxxx..

Kash Poet

Date: 1/22/2012 7:18:00 AM

This is wonderful Carrie.Love it.Best wishes for the contest

Leo Larry Amadore

Date: 1/21/2012 7:36:00 AM

Marbles have always fascinated me...and so do your haikus...beautifully done.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/20/2012 8:25:00 PM

WOWIE, I sure do love it, and hope to do one half this good!!

Russell Sivey

Date: 1/20/2012 7:43:00 PM

This is a very good poem Carrie! I especially loved the last line, "...marbles share the sky..." fantastic thought! I really enjoyed these lines on your write tonight! Thanks for writing this poem for us all to read! Awesome Work!!