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Summer Couplet

Through sand and haze beach goers stroll
Leaving footprints where soft crested waves roll
~*~


6/10/'13

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 7/7/2013 10:52:00 AM

loving your summer couplet :-) CONGRATULATIONS -in Andrea, contest!!! Take Care *xox* Linda

Tim Ryerson

Date: 7/2/2013 2:38:00 AM

Haven't read much of your poems lately Annalise...I see you have not lost your lovely touch...Perfect picture painted here...I am absolutely addicted to the ocean...I must have been a dolphin or a fish in another life - Tim

Connie Gildersleeve

Date: 7/1/2013 6:23:00 PM

Annalise I love this summer image at the beach. Congratulations on your fantastic win. Warm Smiles, Connie

Ilene Bauer

Date: 7/1/2013 4:49:00 PM

nice one! congrats on your win!

Sara Kendrick

Date: 7/1/2013 3:27:00 PM

Great flow and rhyme in this winning work..Enjoyed reading this afternoon..Congrats..Sara

Kim Merryman

Date: 6/30/2013 4:17:00 PM

A perfect picture of summer! Congrats on your 1st place win, Annalise!

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 6/30/2013 2:42:00 PM

Congrad's on your win. Light & Love

Nette Onclaud

Date: 6/30/2013 1:06:00 PM

you capture summer's beautiful moment in every word amd line, annalise... sweet congrats!..:)

John Posey

Date: 6/29/2013 6:47:00 PM

I couldn't agree more with whomever placed this on top... well deserved.... Congratulations.... Jake

Skat A

Date: 6/29/2013 3:02:00 PM

Annalise, a lovey tranquil feel. Congratulations in Andrea's steaming hot summer couplet contest... what else could we ask for -the constant reminder of the hottest season that wonders through my Texas Sky. <3<3<3 ~SKAT~

Kash Poet

Date: 6/29/2013 1:11:00 PM

Congrats Annalise on your win in the contest.Lovely couplet!

Carrie Richards

Date: 6/29/2013 10:08:00 AM

This rolls off the tongue, so perfectly and lovely!! Congratulations on this beautiful poem, Annalise!!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/29/2013 8:38:00 AM

I love this one. A stroll on the beach is , for me, the perfect summer image!! congrats on your number one win in my contest.

Joyce Johnson

Date: 6/29/2013 8:22:00 AM

Summer contentment in a capsule. Congratulations. Love, Joyce

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 6/29/2013 7:23:00 AM

Aahhhhh congratulations.

Drjim Martin

Date: 6/29/2013 7:01:00 AM

Very nice!! Congrats on your win....Jim

Seren Roberts

Date: 6/29/2013 3:10:00 AM

Nice gentle couplet liked it .....Seren

Jack Horne

Date: 6/15/2013 11:21:00 AM

I can picture this sweet scene

Connie Gildersleeve

Date: 6/14/2013 6:58:00 PM

This is a fine couplet. I miss the sand, the waves and the smell of sea air. An awesome image you've conveyed. Thank you for an inviting beach scene. Warm Smiles, Connie

Harry Horsman

Date: 6/14/2013 8:48:00 AM

this is amazing Annalise, the visual so good.,..

Jack Ellison

Date: 6/14/2013 7:47:00 AM

Love your poetry dear Annalise! Words are few but are oh so expressive! Hugs...

Timothy Hicks

Date: 6/13/2013 12:26:00 AM

Love the subtlety of your couplet. Reminds me of my trips to the Oregon coast, literally spending hours walking along the coast line... oh the beauty of living in the moment.... those footprints don't last long!

Carrie Richards

Date: 6/12/2013 6:38:00 PM

Mmmm....this is a summer dream.....so nice!!

Nette Onclaud

Date: 6/12/2013 12:55:00 PM

been a while anna... i love the glow of your words, soo sothing as a summer's breath... much enjoyed!..:) huggs