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Summer-Colored

So many memories I have are summer-colored, like those walking-down-the-lane days recalled in various hues of green. Green for Grandpa’s cornfields spread all around us and green for the grass on which my sisters and I used to run and play. Besides that color green, which prettily surrounded me through all my childhood, I think a favorite memory would be the colors of one lovely day spent with my family, the family created by my spouse and me and a day our kids were young. We lived near San Francisco. Few troubles plagued us then and I loved our short time in California! One summer day at last we went to see the beach of Santa Cruz. I don’t remember details of everything we did. We walked along the boardwalk, naturally. I’m sure the kids, both pre-teens, enjoyed the rides. Even I was every bit as excited as the two of them. I’m sure my spouse and I took pictures, ate good-tasting food and watched our children doing things all children love to do. But what stood out for me was our time spent on the beach and how we all jumped up to greet each wave that tumbled toward us time and time again to knock us down. What pure pleasure in the splashes of blue that fun-filled day, the blue of the Pacific, which chilled me at the start until I warmed to it as the yellow sun in blue of sky above smiled down on us. Yes, the blue of sky and water and the constant shining yellow of the sun: those would be the colors of my favorite summer memory -when times were good and we were young and simply having fun.
new colors emerge in the autumn of one's life soon is winter's dirge as blue asters wave in fields bye-bye to sweet summer time For the Haibun Free-Style Contest of scott thirtyseven

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Date: 12/22/2015 3:35:00 PM
Congrats on your winning work..!!!Sara
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Date: 12/21/2015 3:38:00 PM
Congrats on placing in the Haibun free-style contest!
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Date: 12/21/2015 7:23:00 AM
Great win Andrea and loved this write. Congratulations!
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Date: 12/20/2015 7:19:00 PM
Andrea, Congrats on your Haibun Free-Style win. ~LINDA~
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Date: 12/20/2015 5:40:00 PM
Congrats Andrea! Felt like going on a holiday to the beach as well as running through the cornfields!
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Date: 12/20/2015 12:57:00 PM
Perfect! Congrats Andrea:) *smiles*
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Date: 12/20/2015 11:07:00 AM
ANDREA, Congratulations on your Haibun Free-Styled win. WUV **SKAT**
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Date: 12/20/2015 10:29:00 AM
Summer memories are often colored in fun...Congrats on your win Andrea
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Date: 12/20/2015 9:58:00 AM
Congrats Andrea to win. Love. Anisha D
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Date: 12/20/2015 9:57:00 AM
There are times that I wish I still lived on the Pacific rim, but alas not for now. Thanks for writing such a wonderful example of my fledgling form, and for taking me back to those summer days in New Zealand. Though your wonderful colour metaphor has me reading this poem in sepia. Congrats on the 4th placing.
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Date: 12/3/2015 10:51:00 AM
Wonderful prose and powerful ending Tanka.
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Date: 12/3/2015 9:53:00 AM
Wow, totally awesome the last piece of the style is jaw dropping, just brilliant writing. A Fav!
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Date: 12/2/2015 7:29:00 AM
Andrea, that was a beautiful walk down memory lane with you, I liked so much the part about the waves and the sky, well I liked the whole poem actually, l love it 7
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Date: 12/1/2015 6:42:00 PM
Hello Andreas... good memories tend to match with the warmest and brightest colours. Thank you for the trip down your memory lane Andrea - Lindsay
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Date: 12/1/2015 6:15:00 PM
It's amazing how memories live on and on. Vivid narrative and nice poem. Mike Bayles
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Date: 12/1/2015 11:38:00 AM
Happiness is most often found wrapped in nature's splendid coat of appealing colors and sounds. Emile.
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Date: 12/1/2015 11:09:00 AM
Beautiful trip down memory lane, wonderful poem! I have to go and unpack my snow shovel now grrrrrrrrrrr
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Date: 12/1/2015 3:32:00 AM
Ah, the memories of times gone by...Once again you have shown your unique versatility when it comes to writing different forms...I'm rating this a 7 and you a perfect 10. Merry Christmas my friend! - Tim
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Date: 11/30/2015 4:32:00 PM
WoW! Andrea, this is so amazing. So you spent time in the beautiful state of California. I guess I should appreciate it more. I concur with the one below this reads like a winner to me. Best of luck in the contest. It's a for sure 7 and a fav:-) Alexis
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Date: 11/30/2015 11:53:00 AM
Reads like a winner.. way to go..I am sure Scott will like it.Thanks for stopping by...Sara
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Date: 11/30/2015 2:02:00 AM
Andie, love the colorful memories you shared with us.. =`) The free verse is nice... love the way you use the bye-bye its cute.. =`)~Olive Eloisa =`)
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Date: 11/30/2015 12:23:00 AM
Enjoyed your memories and was even reminded of my own... happy times in the waves... I like the color coding of your memories. Am not familiar with Haibun or free verse much either. You do have a way of making it so alive and personal. Good luck in the contest!
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Date: 11/29/2015 11:42:00 PM
Love your colors of summer descriptions. Good Luck in the Free style Haibun. SuZ
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Date: 11/29/2015 11:21:00 PM
I enjoyed this little romp down memory lane Andrea. I don't think I knew you ever lived in California. I hope this does great in the contest!
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Date: 11/29/2015 9:23:00 PM
you have a beautiful way with colors, Andrea, no wonder this poem is a winner to be and you know it. Congratulations now and later. Keep up the awesomeness. Always & Forever LINDA
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