Summer -Dorian 42 Style

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~Summer~ (Dorian 42) Summer is fun, seasons hot Umm, temperature just soar! Moving 'round, is kind of hard Makes one tired and rains some more End of summer brings next fall Rays from sun most folks adore. Dorian Petersen Potter aka ladydp2000 copyright@2015 May.16.2016 ~Author's Notes: "Dorian 42" is a poetry style created by Patricia Ann Farnsworth-Simpson, to honor poetess Dorian Petersen Potter, aka ladydp2000. It is an acrostic style of poem done with a 6 letter word to create 6 lines x 7 syllables thus 42 in all.The 2nd 4th and 6th lines must rhyme.As many verses as you wish with a 6 letter word.

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Joanna Daniel

Date: 5/17/2016 1:41:00 AM

I like the way you write in new forms:) This one's great:) I liked your "Sonnetina Rispetto" so much that I wrote a poem in that style:) Thank you for inspiring me Dorian:)

Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 5/17/2016 10:54:00 PM

Thank you ever so kindly Jo,for stopping by and commenting so beautifully on my poem.Deeply appreciated:)So glad to know that you like my Sonnetina Rispetto, and that you wrote a poem with it, Jo.That's awesome!About "Dorian 42" this one here, it was created by Pat and not me as you can read in my authors notes.So pleased you liked Pat's very lovely form here also.She would love to hear that I'm sure:)).And thanks for using my S.R. and all.Wishing you a very lovely week!In his light God bless you!:)D.