Summer Days - the Triolet Style

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~Summer Days~ (Triolet) Summer season brings very hot weather But the days cool again when it departs Hear the birds, butterflies see the heather Summer season brings very hot weather There is fun and lots of sun altogether We see sunshine very bright for most part Summer season brings very hot weather But the days cool again when it departs. Dorian Petersen Potter aka ladydp2000 copyright@2015 July.24.2016

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Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 7/25/2016 4:29:00 AM

- Enjoy every day in summer, time goes by so fast - A great poem, Dorian - Thank congrats to my birthday - Best wishes for a lovely new week :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 9/4/2016 1:22:00 PM

Thank you ever so kindly, Anne-Lise , for stopping by and commenting so beautifully on my poem.Very deeply appreciate it all dear friend.Sending you my love n' prayers always.Take very good care of yourself Anne.Wishing you a very lovely week!In his light God bless you always!:))Hugs!D

Jerry T Curtis

Date: 7/24/2016 8:58:00 PM

This Poem says it all Dorian, I'm in Florida and it's Hot

Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 9/4/2016 1:22:00 PM

Thank you ever so kindly, Jerry, for stopping by and commenting so beautifully on my poem.Deeply appreciated.Wishing you a very lovely week!In his light God bless you!:)D