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Such a Tired Disease

(first poem; at age 15) They cheat lives And close their minds So empty inside No more do things shine Sitting in anxious chairs Lying love is all they care Cheating all their dares And stealing hope without a care Your smile's lost in the devils moonlight Dear child you’re engrossed in dark lights Induced pain is how they bend But it feels so good to feel again The kids walk side by side No smiles but hatred they only hide They wish for happiness oh so dire But all they feel is the rod on fire 'Please loosen up, ” the parasites plead A silent response is dead indeed For children trip and children fall But they are forced, into this crashing call

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 5/21/2011 10:03:00 AM
you wrote it at 15 , thats impressive, means you were meant to write , I am curious how long ago this was
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Adam Hollingsworth
Date: 5/21/2011 1:51:00 PM
presently i'm twenty-one...so, this was six years ago...
Date: 5/20/2011 12:56:00 PM
Love and love this poem. This is your first poem. Fantastic.
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