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It was a sunny day,
i remember going to a bay.
Holding my fathers hand ,
i remember walking in the sand.
I remember the day,
like it was yesterday. 
But never would that memory 
be true again.
coz i have come 
too far away.
leaving the tender 
relations far behind.
In order to achieve success.
Now successful 
i turn back .
only to find no one to share my success,
I ran after success,
without knowing that the greatest
success is having some one close by.

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  1. Date: 8/26/2013 4:47:00 AM
    So you have a vague memory of going for fishing.... A~D :)

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    Date: 8/26/2013 5:01:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry