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Flurries of Flakes

As Sol slips off of the Earth's edge, twilight slowly morphs into night. And Autumn colors disappear as dusk dims all remaining light. Wildlife shivers in frigid winds, contemplating the coming snow. And dusk smears the horizon red as crimson rivers ebb and flow. Hoar-frost clouds, like paper towels, expunge all traces of blue skies. And darkness darkens the heavens till the stars twinkle like fireflies. Squirrels gather up acorns to stash in final preparation. And flurries of flakes hail Winter in joyous anticipation. Fall's horn of Cornucopia gives way to empty fields of muck. And Autumn’s beauty slips away, much like the last migrating duck. (Quatrain) 9/15/2015

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Date: 3/14/2018 2:40:00 PM
Love these lines "And darkness deadens the heavens until the stars come out to play" and "And the fall colors disappear much like the last migrating duck."
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Date: 3/14/2018 3:22:00 PM
Thanks Line, I appreciate your encouragement and support my friend, Emile.
Date: 9/30/2015 1:52:00 PM
Emile, this is excellent! You described the seasons changing expertly. Love the line : skeletal trees stripped naked, awesome! Congrats on a fine win! Hugs
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Date: 9/30/2015 2:45:00 PM
Thanks Cecilia, I appreciate your encouraging comments. Emile.
Date: 9/30/2015 11:13:00 AM
Emile, congratulations on your wonderful win. SKAT LOVE
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Emile Pinet
Date: 9/30/2015 11:47:00 AM
Thanks SKAT, I appreciate your unwavering support. Emile.
Date: 9/30/2015 10:59:00 AM
Wonderful use of the words and great technique..Way to go..Congrats..Sara
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Emile Pinet
Date: 9/30/2015 11:46:00 AM
Thanks Sara, I appreciate your support. Emile.
Date: 9/30/2015 7:35:00 AM
Great Job Emile, congrats on your win!!!
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Emile Pinet
Date: 9/30/2015 7:54:00 AM
Thanks Edward, I appreciate your support. Emile.
Date: 9/29/2015 11:44:00 PM
Wow that's so real and beautiful Emile! Masterful work n superb first place win! Big congrats!
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Emile Pinet
Date: 9/30/2015 7:55:00 AM
Thanks Upma, I appreciate your continued support and encouragement. Emile.
Date: 9/29/2015 10:47:00 PM
Great poem! Descriptive, skillfully written Congratulations! Janice
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Emile Pinet
Date: 9/30/2015 7:54:00 AM
Thanks Janice, I appreciate your support. Emile.
Date: 9/29/2015 7:18:00 PM
Congratulations Emile! On your win!
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Emile Pinet
Date: 9/29/2015 7:25:00 PM
Thanks Michael, I appreciate it. Emile.
Date: 9/29/2015 6:53:00 PM
stunning Emile a joy to read congrats on 1st hugs 7
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Emile Pinet
Date: 9/29/2015 7:18:00 PM
Thanks Shadow, it was fun to compete with so many talented poets. Emile.
Date: 9/29/2015 6:03:00 PM
A very unique way of drawing attention to the poem's subject using different tones of ink. Congratulation for your WIN and unique verse Emile! ;-)
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Emile Pinet
Date: 9/29/2015 7:22:00 PM
Thanks Teddy, I appreciate your support. Emile.
Date: 9/29/2015 5:39:00 PM
WoW!!! Good write, Emile.Congratulations on your win!!! Hugs Eve
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Emile Pinet
Date: 9/29/2015 7:22:00 PM
Thanks Eve, I appreciate your comments. Emile.
Date: 9/29/2015 4:25:00 PM
Many congrats Emile I can see why Shadow loved this so much :-) hugs Jan xx
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Emile Pinet
Date: 9/29/2015 7:23:00 PM
Thanks Jan, I appreciate your comments. Emile.
Date: 9/29/2015 3:55:00 PM
you did a superb job with the words. BIG congrats on an amazing win with this gem.
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Emile Pinet
Date: 9/29/2015 7:24:00 PM
Thanks Andrea, I appreciate your encouraging comments. Emile.
Date: 9/29/2015 3:11:00 PM
Emile, your dramatic poem sets the tone for the coming harsh winter. I think about the animals and how they adapt and how some freeze. I only lived where it snowed in my younger years yet with visits back to Kansas I know the difficulties, especially trying to drive in the snow and ice. Congratulations on your very deserving first place win Emile! #7
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Emile Pinet
Date: 9/29/2015 7:25:00 PM
Thanks so much Connie, I appreciate your friendly comments. Emile.
Date: 9/16/2015 6:19:00 AM
- Once again .... a great poem, Emile ..... Every season is beautiful in its own way - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Emile Pinet
Date: 9/16/2015 10:23:00 AM
Thanks Anne-Lise, I appreciate your support. Emile.
Date: 9/16/2015 1:38:00 AM
A lovely depiction of the season's change, Emile. Good luck in the contest. Regards, Viv
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Emile Pinet
Date: 9/16/2015 10:24:00 AM
Thanks so much Viv, I appreciate your support. Emile.
Date: 9/15/2015 10:52:00 PM
Liked your poem very much. Good seasonal. Good luck in contest!
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Emile Pinet
Date: 9/16/2015 10:24:00 AM
Thanks Thomas, I appreciate your support. Emile.
Date: 9/15/2015 8:44:00 PM
G'day Emile... a nice picture you have painted with words Emile - good luck - Lindsay
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Emile Pinet
Date: 9/16/2015 10:25:00 AM
Thanks so much Lindsay, I appreciate your comments. Emile.
Date: 9/15/2015 3:37:00 PM
so visually rendered by your golden quill, emile... wow.. huggs!
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Emile Pinet
Date: 9/15/2015 3:42:00 PM
Thanks so much Nette, I appreciate your support. Emile.

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