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Strip-Show

Ah my dear girl, how you show hidden treasure In awesome and innocent ways Small actions spark cold, thrilling pleasure I pant at your power displays Legs crossed to perfection, so cruelly they mock! Lithe hands tug the cuff of blue jeans Toes pointed slightly, you peel off your sock Revealing your bare naked dream

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 5/26/2015 3:33:00 PM
Wow
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Date: 10/8/2011 2:27:00 PM
Congrats Tim on "Strip-Show" being featured. Vince
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Date: 10/3/2011 11:14:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Tim. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/25/2009 12:24:00 AM
haha great rhyme!
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Date: 8/21/2009 7:17:00 AM
What a tease!!! :)
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Date: 8/21/2009 6:02:00 AM
Very passionate in a few lines. Keep writing. Sara
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